Se7eN (Freestyle)

[Se7eN]

Ayo,
I'm Se7eN and I rip, a mic wit some slow hits//
I crush my enemies, with energy, and a nine inch dick//
So much 4 an impact, I packed some shit intact//
Wit a razor blade, my trade, is 2 keep shit in packs//
I don't talk shit, I rap, I drop pure numbers of atomic bombs//
Cruch your world, in a swirl, gotcha praying and losing your calm//
So I roll solo, and I've never been a fucking homo//
I'm more off-beat, wit soft heat, than a mothafucking hobo//
So low though, say pshyco, and I'll push the red button//
Your a soft loser, a bruiser, who really thinks he's somethin'//
Your nothin', a small vocab, your speech is so low that//
I'll rip you, shit you, out like I really didn't know that//(damn)
Se7eN don't play bullshit, I juss rap shit, to not cool it//
And cause a war, str8 2 the core, and fire dozen of spittin bullets//
(hahahahaha)
Vote good or bad on the poll,iight peace out, Se7eN

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Bu this was ok...structure in this was alright, could be touched up though i think....you had some multies, but i think they could have been a bit better though.....flow in this was ok, but it fell off at some points...but keep at it.