RW WK4: TheShaman vs Spree (FEEDBACK)

[Bag Mandela]

Regular Battle
Bars due Saturday 16th Nov
Public voting closes Monday
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Overall public vote = 1 vote
MV’s vote = 1 vote
Bags vote = 1 vote
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6 lines each (doesn’t have to be 3 bars with a set up, punch format, you have creative freedom)



Posting explanations / references below your bars is strongly recommended.
Rebuttals, late drops (unless you have a 24hr ext) & no shows are an instant loss.

MV & I will reach a conclusion on bar of the week & the winner will receive $20 to purchase a small quantity of narcotics.

@miracle @Slayerr.

@TheShaman @Spree

[TheShaman]

He started light like a Budweiser, just writing one liners while researching gun types and drug markets. Now he's stuck in this place like son dials up hotlines for Alzheimers.
He needed a Buzz higher than Aldrin. By now, he could be a Professor Emeritus of French military history, cuz all he talks bout is Jeanne D'arc: "This heroin is on fire!"
But yo, it humours me when there's soon to be a eulogy. You've been on this site for 10 years. Congrats, that's a jubilee. So truthfully, just go on shooting, Spree..
Nah, a decade on here? You don't deserve my respect. It's like he's married, still tryna work out the kinks. But it's time to leave. So be like Elon and turn the bird to an X.
I know it's sad and tough when you carry all these rap awards, but just rip the bandaid off; go have a crush on Sarah Young. Rapbattles.com memorabilia: You should hang it up.
Cuz when Spree's without PR you're able to see that he's ape-in the Chree. I don't even break a sweat when I break to a beat, so why in the hell Bag gave me a-Spree? (Esprit)

[Bag Mandela]

Haha heroin bar was joke, think Spree is pretty straight when it comes to all that shit but was still amusing.
damn, can't believe I haven't heard a turn the bird to an X bar before, that's fire.
Creative nameflip on the closer too, props Shaman, solid verse.
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