RW WK4: ItsBav vs FaQEyeReddit (FEEDBACK)

[Bag Mandela]

Regular Battle
Bars due Saturday 16th Nov
Public voting closes Monday
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Overall public vote = 1 vote
MV’s vote = 1 vote
Bags vote = 1 vote
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6 lines each (doesn’t have to be 3 bars with a set up, punch format, you have creative freedom)



Posting explanations / references below your bars is strongly recommended.
Rebuttals, late drops (unless you have a 24hr ext) & no shows are an instant loss.

MV & I will reach a conclusion on bar of the week & the winner will receive $20 to purchase a small quantity of narcotics.

@ItsBav @FaQEyeReddi

If it is looking likely Bav is going to no show, he will be replaced by ChatGPT for this round

[FaQEyeReddit]

i want narcotics

[FaQEyeReddit]

I call shots If I give anyone of these 5gs the signal get ya head unscrewed...they'll put a bomb in his cell,
Soon as he answers the phone he'll hear a metro boom..
Life was always oxymorons I guess light n dark, good and bad, ying n yang I get it dude.. it explains mfs just like you, who live they whole life on the offensive just to end up dead with defensive wounds..
Back out the poles bullets hit'n you and ya bitch this a swing state.. get ya hood aired soon as you see these pipes man a' fold like the intake.. rounds on top of rounds like sprewells, bullets left ya body still spinning in air after ya shit brakes..

[Bag Mandela]

Solid verse FaQ, I rated that 2nd bar, offensive / defensive wounds, dope - although oxymorons are more like "The best of Rebecca Black" because there can be no best of her since she's shit, that was inversion you were using.
That's nuts, you're the only other person I've seen use the manifold wordplay, salute.
Gonna leave this open for feedback til the next rounds good to go.