RD1: Spree vs. miracle (OPEN FOR VOTES)

[Wuxia]

Regular Battle
Verses due NO DUE DATES*
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES*

Must check-in 24/48 hours for NO DUE DATES to take effect
*be reasonable

10-lines MAX Regular Battle
16-lines MAX Contendership and Championship Battle


You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.

@Spree
@miracle

[miracle]

your dead.

[Spree]

Check

[miracle]

@Spree

U need to chill out w/ the corny shit before u get battered by bricks n kicks
Ya so fucking cheesy Dave portnoy will come to ya crib n give u a 9.6
Run n hide bitch.. there’s no chance u can face a murderer
If u do decide to make a stand that shit’ll fall apart like some ikea furniture
Usually I’m a honorable man but in this battle I’m whooping u fast
Fuck chivalry n women… with me this bitch is coming in last
Grow tf up bro.. ur childish wit makes for a lame rhyme
It’s funny u act like a Constantine n you concepts date the same time
Weak shit is all u drop. U couldn’t electrify us using cardiac paddles
We can’t stand ya verseman n still somehow rather read one of his battles

[Spree]

Aka sturdy

*Davedilly did time and is Miracles neighbor*


Sick of this fat fuck…
Our beef ends with me slapping this bitch up
Fuck you & your pork belly, plus it looks like that’s what your daily diet consists of
Every verse Vs me is like Verse, a crying bitch gettin beat/raped
So it’s best you also “pull a concede”… like your wife on DaveDilly release date
Plus you a dead beat dad, slob, grease ball all would consider a weak swine
Cook & clean in 168 hrs- things Dave taught your kids in weeks time
S’why your wife lets you get out & do what ever & man that’s felt…
she gives you a long leash to do you… & we want you to use 1 & hang yourself
Pussy I’ll punch your mid section to heaven, yeah you down & dead
Pound till Sternum, & he’s got blood pouring out his chest

[Chree]

Vote for spree, even though u recycled the hanging bar.
It felt like miracles whole verse was meant for verse(probably cuz they both flaked on the battle.)

If u do decide to make a stand that shit’ll fall apart like some ikea furniture
Best Bar but every other bar you wrote didnt have any effort like this one.

Consistency of spree's wp wins. (i even was going to use the seeded word play myself) but gj

[Jack Hallows]

Lmao of course the last 3 verses we’re waiting on are from the mods
hahaha..

cool match. wonder how many times y’all have done this before.

getting into it, i liked miracle’s opening punch. the set up could’ve been executed a lot better, but the barstools sports angle was funny. ikea line was aight, i’ve seen them around so nothing too spectacular. chivalry line was probably the best in the verse. next line was eh & closer was aight. over all it was a decent verse. opener & chivalry were the stand out lines.

Spree’s opener was cool, 2nd bar was probably best of the verse, good segue into 3rd bar. last two ok. overall decent verse, i liked the personals.

miracle had couple funny lines, Spree had a couple good personals. Spree was more consistent though so he gets my vote

Vote - Spree

reading about pizza & pork belly has me hungry as fk.

Howl.

[daveDILLY]

this was good
not the best i read from u 2 but still good read
spree was stronger in my opinion
idk some of mirs ideas wer good but maybe cud hit harder
constant teen ok but cud hit harder
Portnoy line ok little cheesy lol
winner: spree

[HEK TEAFY]

I HAD TO GO WITH THE IKEA FUURNITURE AND COMING IN LAST BARS THOSE WERE FRESH AND WHAT WON THE BATTLE....


MVGT-MIRACLE

[MarkB]

vote - miracle

I felt the bars more, and I enjoyed the flow more, and it actually read well
I dont get the personals so if I missed something then it's because I dont know

probably the best key battle I read on this site so far, both actually had some nice lines