8 Lines an emcee.
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Due Date Sunday.
Leggo!
8 Lines an emcee.
Explained votes only.
Due Date Sunday.
Leggo!
checking in for the team.
M³
@Austin Flowers @Daryl Baker
@Jack Hallows @miracle verse
these fakers thuggin? nah, niggas softer than quaker muffins
so if i raise & blaze the oven, i’m bound to hit Daryl with a Baker’s dozen
get strangled & bludgeoned. so foul i cause calamity
handle garden sheers handedly to send boxes of Flowers’ parts to Austin family
damage me? cease this chicanery
Portable Golden Shower’s the only time u’ll see these poor bastards basking under a Canopy
ur fates were hung by a thread, a miracle’s what u need to survive
& since i snatched him from ur thread, ur fates were sealed before the battle even went live
These two fags probably fucking.. it’s gay shit the whole time their awake
At anytime you can find baker with his hands in flower manhandling that cake
I’m not making this shit up.. that would be just rude
This ain’t the walking dead but most likely Daryl Dixon this dude
Ur out ya prime.. in our last battle u felt u got robbed like a crimeOriginally Posted by Austin Flowers
But how bad u gotta be to lose in something that requires you rhyme.. n I didn’t rhyme?
You two getting bound/gagged n murdered. So cut the chatter
facing DNA? we’ll leave forensic teams trying to analyze that in yall blood splatter
Last edited by miracle; October 26th, 2024 at 11:03 PM
@Austin Flowers @Daryl Baker
I’ll give ya extension until midnight tonight
This a double edged sword… a blade and a fairy… this fruit ninja//
Aunt Vivian. two Bitches. These boys ain’t tropical gangsters they stool pigeons//
This a hollow miracle…an indecisive decision//
Catch PSALM biblical like they learnin a new religion//
No sandwich makin', you gonna see Miracle whipped//
Look at jack tryna play hero n shit… as long as you know ya hero a bitch//
Dome shot…. His hands are shakin', he caught a critical hit//
His body shaking… he must be missing a limb… he gone need a wheelchair to sit//
This a head on collision killing the driver and the passenger//
you could have brought soule And spree with yall we could of made it a massacre//
They've got the eye rolls and the knees, all they need is the mascara//
They Sweet like Thai Chai and ice cream, about to turn this to a night terror//
We're like John Stockton with his hands on the rock//
And them, Deshaun Watson, with his hands on a broad//
We gone get the dub without a hope and prayer jack sparrow or Jack Frost//
they don’t wanna dance with me amputee Jack gone need a miracle to jack off//
???
Jack n Miracle
these fakers thuggin? nah, niggas softer than quaker muffins
so if i raise & blaze the oven, i’m bound to hit Daryl with a Baker’s dozen
good opener
get strangled & bludgeoned. so foul i cause calamity
handle garden sheers handedly to send boxes of Flowers’ parts to Austin family
this is hard. i think you should have left it as implied but thats just nitpicking.
damage me? cease this chicanery
Portable Golden Shower’s the only time u’ll see these poor bastards basking under a Canopy
lol ok . i fuck with this. "chicanery" good word here lol
ur fates were hung by a thread, a miracle’s what u need to survive
& since i snatched him from ur thread, ur fates were sealed before the battle even went live
i wasn't feeling this was. too light
These two fags probably fucking.. it’s gay shit the whole time their awake
At anytime you can find baker with his hands in flower manhandling that cake
fire! this was a great use of a double np
I’m not making this shit up.. that would be just rude
This ain’t the walking dead but most likely Daryl Dixon this dude
this was cool. i fw it. lil jab with the np
Quote Originally Posted by Austin Flowers View Post
At least you rhymed. Miracle would have won without rhyming don’t worry.
Ur out ya prime.. in our last battle u felt u got robbed like a crime
But how bad u gotta be to lose in something that requires you rhyme.. n I didn’t rhyme?
the rhyming felt off which i think was intentional because of the topic. i kinda like this one. its a light jab but a solid personal.
You two getting bound/gagged n murdered. So cut the chatter
facing DNA? we’ll leave forensic teams trying to analyze that in yall blood splatter
closer was light jab.
vs
Daryl and Austin
This a double edged sword… a blade and a fairy… this fruit ninja//
Aunt Vivian. two Bitches. These boys ain’t tropical gangsters they stool pigeons//
this punch should have been worded differently IMO. double edged sword/blade and fairy..fruit ninja should have been the actual punch. that shit was fire. i like this bar, its just a bit off for me.
This a hollow miracle…an indecisive decision//
Catch PSALM biblical like they learnin a new religion//
lol i fw this. simple but cool.
No sandwich makin', you gonna see Miracle whipped//
Look at jack tryna play hero n shit… as long as you know ya hero a bitch//
impeccable multies but the punch was lack luster. its funny so ill say its a light jab
Dome shot…. His hands are shakin', he caught a critical hit//
His body shaking… he must be missing a limb… he gone need a wheelchair to sit//
if you placed your punches with these multi syllable patterns these would be crazy. right now this is a light jab
This a head on collision killing the driver and the passenger//
you could have brought soule And spree with yall we could of made it a massacre//
ifw this. playing off the definition of massacre 3to4+ people being murdered at once.
They've got the eye rolls and the knees, all they need is the mascara//
They Sweet like Thai Chai and ice cream, about to turn this to a night terror//
this connection was as bit to loose IMO. im assuming you are connecting the sweets to nightmares/night terrors. the metaphor was too subtle for me and the punch was more self-hype in a way.
We're like John Stockton with his hands on the rock//
And them, Deshaun Watson, with his hands on a broad//
the rhyming was off here and this bar was more of a slight as apposed to a punch and very statementish.
We gone get the dub without a hope and prayer jack sparrow or Jack Frost//
they don’t wanna dance with me amputee Jack gone need a miracle to jack off//
this was light but still hella funny
v/miracle&jack
entertaining battle. I saw a lot of dope bars and concepts here. i think miracle and jack were just too polished for daryl and Mr Powers. there were few bars that weren't solid on for miraclejack. while austiryal sometimes struggled to find the wording to round off a punch, the material was there. the concepts were fresh. good work
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bakers dozen was good
austins family also cool
manhandle cake & blood splatter nice 2
4 good bars from jack & mir
new religion & hero a batch was coofrom the other guys
flow was nice just need to get more heavy on the punch
winner jack & mir
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