One in Infinity

[Chree]

Lately there's this light forming inside these inner parts..
Lit up like a synagogue, my silhouette on the ninth story.
But really I'm, just feeling it now.
Watching life revolve around me, four just a little while.
thinking youre above this? I'll rip the ceiling down.
Hit you with ceiling tiles, let it dawn on thee.
Are you in or out? I've been killing clowns and their silly styles.
I'll be here all "week", flip the bar drinks getting really strong (yeah) this is how we all think.
I just let the art breathe.
...
and then it really shines, yeah this is how you hard sync.
Aint distracted by no soft speech
On my millionth grind rails popping large kinks.
I can put you on this game for a small fee.

[Candy]

love it dude and your signature dope

[LJLJnice]

I think these are great lyrics I posted a reply
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magery and Creativity:

"Light forming inside these inner parts" and "Lit up like a synagogue" create a vivid visual. The religious imagery is striking and memorable.
"Ninth story" suggests a high level or status, reinforcing the speaker's elevated position.
Thinking you're above this? I'll rip the ceiling down" and "Killing clowns and their silly styles" exude confidence and assert dominance, which is effective in a battle context.
Areas for Improvement:
"But really I'm, just feeling it now": This line seems to disrupt the flow slightly. It could be rephrased or connected better to the preceding and following lines to maintain momentum.

[Lady Poet]

One of your best verse
Great lyric it fit topic
your flow amazingly
Keep up the good work

[Austin Flowers]

The cadence is dope. Once you started bringing the ceiling down and hittin em with ceiling tiles I got turnt up! Cool topic as well.