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@hello there
@JEM.
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Battle with JEM? Fuck this footnote...
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WHEN MY CREW ROLL UP, THEY LIKE "Hello There, WHO GASSED HIM?"
Cuz I'm lit as fuck, and J fire only when I ash him...
I'd bash him, but being JEM is fucked up enough...
His girl's a dog: The only time JEM's in a ruff...
And this next bar? It got power only I can deliver:
My range-a winnin' "GOLD ONLY"... but JEM-A been silver...
Plus, JEM been gay, he's... been dressin' as thin ladies,
And the fuckin' HOLO SWITCH HIM like JEM in the 80s...
I hate to say you blow, or you're gay, or lazy, bro...
But you can Google GEM-N-I, and what's the fucker say? HELLO!
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The actual footnotes:
https://powerrangers.fandom.com/wiki/Gemma
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jem_(TV_series)
https://gemini.google.com/app
Last edited by hello there; March 13th, 2024 at 05:10 PM
JEM BACK?! Israel, but I ain’t taking hostages
He couldn’t stomach proof of life after I shot his esophagus
What’s wrong with him? Before dude is gone
Ya fam either go fund me or you gon’ need one for ya funeral
And we knew his hoe would try to find him
& Document to save her! Now she confused like Joe Biden
Old me is better than the old me - let’s get honest…
I’m head of the table, you just Dwayne Johnson
So pray often, I been a man - even gave myself fathers day gifts
With no kids, So when I raise arms, even ya pops ill get hit.
Easy.
hello there
I'd bash him, but being JEM is fucked up enough...
His girl's a dog: The only time JEM's in a ruff...
Plus, JEM been gay, he's... been dressin' as thin ladies,
And the fuckin' HOLO SWITCH HIM like JEM in the 80s...
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JEM
JEM BACK?! Israel, but I ain’t taking hostages
He couldn’t stomach proof of life after I shot his esophagus
Old me is better than the old me - let’s get honest…
I’m head of the table, you just Dwayne Johnson
this punch didnt hit that hard for me but the set-up was tuff
im going with Hello there on this one. JEM's in the ruff was pretty funny. and i think his misses were stronger
v/Hello there
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HT- opener was ok, light jab… “Jems in a ruff”?? Not really sure what that means, what’s a ruff?….. imma be honest I ckinda faded out after this on ur verse… it didn’t do nothing for me bro … nothing really stood out n I had to check all the links u left to figure out what u was talking about n honestly the payout wasn’t worth having to do that… no hate at all dude this was mediocre
JEM had go fund me n that’s about it. No hate either but u lacked sting and creativity.. work on trying to craft a stronger idea or you both might just need to shake the rust, y’all done this battling shit before… I gotta get this to hello for being a little more creative n wanting that W more so VOTE HELLO
WHEN MY CREW ROLL UP, THEY LIKE "Hello There, WHO GASSED HIM?"
Cuz I'm lit as fuck, and J fire only when I ash him...
* This this was cool with the wordplay and hit on nameplay. In DC, we call rolling weed 'rolling a J' before we smoke it. Not sure if its called that everywhere or it that was the intent of the punch
I'd bash him, but being JEM is fucked up enough...
His girl's a dog: The only time JEM's in a ruff...
* Another solid nameplay hit
Plus, JEM been gay, he's... been dressin' as thin ladies,
And the fuckin' HOLO SWITCH HIM like JEM in the 80s...
* Yeah, I use to watch this show, so it shows my age. the holo switch him wordplay was fire
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JEM BACK?! Israel, but I ain’t taking hostages
He couldn’t stomach proof of life after I shot his esophagus
* thought this was good wordplay
And we knew his hoe would try to find him
& Document to save her! Now she confused like Joe Biden
Thought this wordplay was good too
Vote - Hello There - Had the strong verse.
winner hello
both were needing more
hello had the better trys at punches
good match up though u guys were even throughout
hello was stronger more
Jems verse would’ve worked better as audio than text and came off a bit basic, hello wasn’t too much better but concepts and structure were better and had some nice ideas
V/hello
WHEN MY CREW ROLL UP, THEY LIKE "Hello There, WHO GASSED HIM?"
Cuz I'm lit as fuck, and J fire only when I ash him...
I hate to say you blow, or you're gay, or lazy, bro...
But you can Google GEM-N-I, and what's the fucker say? HELLO!
^ this could have been better if you used something other than hello
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JEM BACK?! Israel, but I ain’t taking hostages
He couldn’t stomach proof of life after I shot his esophagus
What’s wrong with him? Before dude is gone
Ya fam either go fund me or you gon’ need one for ya funeral
I got 2v2 solid bars but I think in terms of misses I got Hello with more creativity on his bars. actually flowed a bit better. good short read
v hello
I didn’t really like anything from hello’s verse. And I googled Gemni like you said and it didn’t say hello.. fuck you! Jem’s first two punches were cool. That’s about all I liked from his verse. Yeah I gotta go with JEM because I just didn’t see anything in Hello’s verse that I actually liked.
v/Jem
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