Escape Artist

[mynameageef]

Have you ever
been so under the weather, you're damn near in the ground?
And somehow you found the energy, to make a sound
like a mouse running around at the feet of a lion wearing a crown?
Have you ever
Been swimming in a sea of green?
With jealousy pulling at your ankles, by people you've never seen?
but know, that want you at the centrepiece, of a red dream?
Crimson scenes, horror stories, trying to pull you into the abyss
familiar, close, far, sick pricks with you depicted dead in their scenes
Have you ever
Supported Atlas to hold the world up on his shoulders?
And despite everything, no matter what, somehow you got older?
Then, you figured out every last fucking cunt that fucked you over?

I hope you never had to.
But I don't think anyone's that lucky.

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http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...4865-old-verse

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...62-Freestyle-1

[Baron Mynd]

It’s been a while, Pharaoh

[Wuxia]

This asked alot of compelling questions, many of which I've yet to answer or insist on refusing to confront myself. The jealousy pulling at your ankles line was some great imagery, I could envision hands reaching out to drag me under as I leisurely went on to swim unconcerned with the world around me, the thought of people I don't even know wanting me to drown for my carefree demeanor passing through my mind, asking them, what have I ever done to offend you other than to live my own life? That's a question worth looking for an answer to.

[mynameageef]

as I leisurely went on to swim unconcerned with the world around me, the thought of people I don't even know wanting me to drown for my carefree demeanor passing through my mind, asking them, what have I ever done to offend you other than to live my own life?

You got it, 100%

Muchos gracias.

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Yo, appreciated.
Delighted to see you're keeping the ship sailing.

You know who this is?

[Wuxia]

I kind of remember the name. Did we date online back in 2017?

[mynameageef]

Haha that was meant for Baron Mynd.

[Art.]

Dude this was dope . Idk who ya are , but stick around man , if we get enough topical heads active wel get the league goin , or at least a small tourney .

As far as the piece , short , but it was an easy read , imagery and it flowed extremely well . Really liked the ending of it as well

[mynameageef]

Many thanks for the feedback.

I'll hit some more threads for sure.

[Baron Mynd]

Haha that was meant for Baron Mynd.

Fgee

[construct]

dope shit...very interesting...like to read more