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@Fitzgerald
@RoboCop
Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
@Fitzgerald
@RoboCop
Last edited by Phalanx; December 11th, 2022 at 11:28 PM
ur wife?
a dumb ho no doubt, watch me and the buds go give the slut a full mouth
Cop you late to the party.. cuz that bitch already fucked the whole house
His girls like a used bike but then he's far from a prize
So way he stays ridin that hog, we're Harley suprised.
Plottin your demise.
Fitz, simple, ok, not sure I see the double connection if there is one but it's OK.
Robo hardly/harley is a reach anyway and I unfortunately did not enjoy this in general. It's a miss for me
V/ Fitz.
Vote - Fitz
The nameflip was pretty dope. Would have liked to see the rhyme scheme a lil tighter, but the bar is good. Robo had an almost there bar. Its was one of those obviously firced wps that work if we could pretend the letter D wasnt there phonetically. I can help but read it in the draw of a West Virginian coalminer.
Lmao I love it
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Copulate was a cool np and wp , delivered well
Also thought Harley was pretty cool.. works fine when said in slang
Personal preference, I thought Fitz concept was a slightly better and more enjoyable so he gets my vote... Girls ride boys not the other way around virgin
"Sound stuff out guys" - Barcotic
Fitz! bad follow through ..copulate went nowhere
Robo .. i see your typo .. the way/so way.. and though your punch needed a little work the wording on your pun is a little better .. so my vote is for RoboCop
aka Sorrow: the Broken Wing
this was a dope battle.
fitz your copulate / fucked the whole house was nicely done and harsh
but robos ride the hog / harley surprised was also nicely done and harsh.
based off personal preference and the slightly cleaner hit i, going with robocop here.
good shit
v/robocop
i agree with blue on this one. cop u late was pretty nice but it didnt work well both ways. that was the only flaw i saw. i know some people are against reaches but its not a reach if it makes sense, it was comical and the satirical nature of the bar helped deliver the punch.Originally Posted by Blue Bayou
v/Robo
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This battle was nice, loved both of these. Im struggling to pick a winner but I feel like the bike concept is a joke kids been using forever however nicely flipped it was with the Harley word play. I feel like futz was slightly more direct and flowed nicely.
Close battle good work lads
V/fitz
This a tough one to call tbh it’s more of a preference here
I gotta go with Robo for a smoother execution tough to call tho
4-4
Pretty good battle, HERE.
V/ ROBOCOP
Can we get a real tie breaker
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Would one of you do us the honor of breaking this tie?
Last edited by Phalanx; December 11th, 2022 at 08:33 PM
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