Round 2 - 3. Fresh (1) vs 7. EXalted (3) -Ex Wins

[Phalanx]

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Saturday and will be open until Monday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16 (unless higher limit agreed upon)
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.


Check ins are mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ.

FAILURE TO VOTE ON OTHER BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON OTHER BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!

@Fresh @EXalted

[Exalted.]

10 or 12?

[Fresh]

10 or 12?

10.

[Fresh]

it ain't a game w/ me, i swear that you'll only get facts
n it's funny, on his resume, droppin some solid shit is something that ex lacks
your wishful thinkin at best, I've seen your failures all unfurl
he'll Wonder why hes in this mess while hopin it's the 8th one of the world
no impact with fists or the pen.. cant tell which of em is worse, kid
Identify punch, while we're still trying to do that with one of ya verses
pull up at ya moms crib, in plain sight you'll get slain
and then the Rugged conceal your body before you're buried in the same typa terrain
u hide behind a facade, ur a pussy and you ain't even at all tough
if u reveal ur true colours, it's black n blue from getting beaten the fuck up

[Exalted.]

This match has BotW potential. If both these guys lock in, this should be a war.
[B]Fresh 60/40

aka Habitat

I'm on to the final four baby, you losing twice is just crazy
That's 0 in two. Ironic you'd ONLY see the semi-circle doing a 180°
Previews are in: stage host, voters stopped for a late show
Once they 'Throw- u Off' it cuz Fresh at 60 = rating for Rotten Tomatoes
Your ranking is allll shoddy, beaten no namers & got cocky
U follow, g? This fake gotta big head over small bodies like Alien Autopsy
My crew surround his girl w/ dicks out, makin more ways in
For dead presidents she'll Rushmore in her mouth while face in formation
I evolved faster, but Phal need a handyman next week to start
The winner stands before you; now this Homo Habilis behind me in charts

[Cody Nash]

it ain't a game w/ me, i swear that you'll only get facts
n it's funny, on his resume, droppin some solid shit is something that ex lacks
feels a bit old conceptually lol
your wishful thinkin at best, I've seen your failures all unfurl
he'll Wonder why hes in this mess while hopin it's the 8th one of the world
ehh, aight
no impact with fists or the pen.. cant tell which of em is worse, kid
Identify punch, while we're still trying to do that with one of ya verses
this was neat
pull up at ya moms crib, in plain sight you'll get slain
and then the Rugged conceal your body before you're buried in the same typa terrain
pretty slick
u hide behind a facade, ur a pussy and you ain't even at all tough
if u reveal ur true colours, it's black n blue from getting beaten the fuck up
ok, decent again

vs

I'm on to the final four baby, you losing twice is just crazy
That's 0 in two. Ironic you'd ONLY see the semi-circle doing a 180°
aight
Previews are in: stage host, voters stopped for a late show
Once they 'Throw- u Off' it cuz Fresh at 60 = rating for Rotten Tomatoes
wasn't feeling this wording here
Your ranking is allll shoddy, beaten no namers & got cocky
U follow, g? This fake gotta big head over small bodies like Alien Autopsy
I liked this
My crew surround his girl w/ dicks out, makin more ways in
For dead presidents she'll Rushmore in her mouth while face in formation
not sure about "face in formation" as the ending there but I dig the concept and everything before that
I evolved faster, but Phal need a handyman next week to start
The winner stands before you; now this Homo Habilis behind me in charts
wasn't feelin' this either, ugh.

I wasn't super impressed with either verse. Use to seeing fresher concepts from Fresh, and I feel like Exalted had the concepts but the wording felt weird in a lot of places so the impact wasn't felt as heavy from him... it's really close but I think

Vote Fresh w/ the edge

[Dominate]

it ain't a game w/ me, i swear that you'll only get facts
n it's funny, on his resume, droppin some solid shit is something that ex lacks
It's worded well for the punch but the wp has been done a lot on anyone who's name starts with Ex or X, which is a lot of people over the years. I've seen this a lot
your wishful thinkin at best, I've seen your failures all unfurl
he'll Wonder why hes in this mess while hopin it's the 8th one of the world
The Wonder wp is cool but needed a punchier flip
no impact with fists or the pen.. cant tell which of em is worse, kid
Identify punch, while we're still trying to do that with one of ya verses
The 'identify' wp has been done a lot too, but the punch is good. This is a good example of a generic bar that you can easily adapt to make a personal - Exalted gets criticism for confusing/overly complicated wording, so if you'd referenced that in the set up this would've hit harder
pull up at ya moms crib, in plain sight you'll get slain
and then the Rugged conceal your body before you're buried in the same type terrain
Cool. Haven't seen the wp before. Decent jab
hide behind a facade, ur a pussy and you ain't even at all tough
if u reveal ur true colours, it's black n blue from getting beaten the fuck up
Yep, not bad to finish on

aka Habitat

I'm on to the final four baby, you losing twice is just crazy
That's 0 in two. Ironic you'd ONLY see the semi-circle doing a 180°
It's a good concept but I didn't get it immediately, had to figure it out which takes impact. Still like it but I think the wording could've been like... "only thing doing a 180 is the semi circling your head"
Previews are in: stage host, voters stopped for a late show
Once they 'Throw- u Off' it cuz Fresh at 60 = rating for Rotten Tomatoes
Same here. The wordplay is great but you have to stop and work it out.
Your ranking is allll shoddy, beaten no namers & got cocky
U follow, g? This fake gotta big head over small bodies like Alien Autopsy
Bang. That's good. Hits immediately, good punch, good set up, good wording
My crew surround his girl w/ dicks out, makin more ways in
For dead presidents she'll Rushmore in her mouth while face in formation
Cool
I evolved faster, but Phal need a handyman next week to start
The winner stands before you; now this Homo Habilis behind me in charts
Nah. I pronounce it "Hab uh LISS" not "Hab uh LIES", a quick google didn't find anything supporting the latter

I got Exalted

[Barcotic]

it ain't a game w/ me, i swear that you'll only get facts
n it's funny, on his resume, droppin some solid shit is something that ex lacks
Tf is this? Eminem did ex lacks wp...and 50 text battlers before him
your wishful thinkin at best, I've seen your failures all unfurl
he'll Wonder why hes in this mess while hopin it's the 8th one of the world
Weak
no impact with fists or the pen.. cant tell which of em is worse, kid
Identify punch, while we're still trying to do that with one of ya verses
Execution on point here but identify is old old
pull up at ya moms crib, in plain sight you'll get slain
and then the Rugged conceal your body before you're buried in the same typa terrain
Cool
u hide behind a facade, ur a pussy and you ain't even at all tough
if u reveal ur true colours, it's black n blue from getting beaten the fuck up
Oh hell na, this idea beeen dead

I'm on to the final four baby, you losing twice is just crazy
That's 0 in two. Ironic you'd ONLY see the semi-circle doing a 180°
Cool idea, weak execution
Previews are in: stage host, voters stopped for a late show
Once they 'Throw- u Off' it cuz Fresh at 60 = rating for Rotten Tomatoes
What?
Your ranking is allll shoddy, beaten no namers & got cocky
U follow, g? This fake gotta big head over small bodies like Alien Autopsy
Fire
My crew surround his girl w/ dicks out, makin more ways in
For dead presidents she'll Rushmore in her mouth while face in formation
Old wp, corny flip
I evolved faster, but Phal need a handyman next week to start
The winner stands before you; now this Homo Habilis behind me in charts
Fuck no

Rugged vs. Ufology
Exalted wins

[Plot]

I got Ex here he had creativity over consistently how ever weird that is. Wasnt feeling the fresher opener I feel like 'shit' concepts are super old, didnt like the 'wonder' flip as a punch, 'identify' also a bit throw away but was worded well nice to read and personal. Rugged was interesting not sure if it works both ways for me, closer was ok Ive done true colours before.
Ex opener was kinda dope, loved the semi circle 180 connection, the rotten tomatoes had mad potential too, unsure how the 60 fits in though. Alien autopsy was dope liked that one, rushmore had potential but wording issues on the punch, habillis the same good np but wording dosent work smooth for me.
Good battle

[Spree]

Exalted wins