Round 2 - 1. Dominate (4) vs 11. Letterman (0) Dom Wins

[Phalanx]

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Saturday and will be open until Monday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16 (unless higher limit agreed upon)
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.


Check ins are mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ.

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@Dominate @Letterman

[Dominate]

Check g/luck.

[Letterman]

What’s good bro

[Dominate]

Sent 16 to Phalanx

[Letterman]

I almost forgot about this. Ext please

[Dominate]

Yeah man that’s fine. @Phalanx I’ll post my own verse before the new deadline tomorrow. May make some edits.

[Letterman]

Got a mil on the waist. Keep talking tough & I will let it raise
This can only go left like Zoolander.. & that was confirmed when I blew steel in his face
They gave a jobber the belt. Ill prove this bum is weak
You gotta know your roleplayer.. now watch how they switch up after Dom gets beat
Acts tough but he’s a creep. Guess it’s hard to admit
But I know you’re far from pussy, cuz he’s not allowed to be within 100 yards of a chick
BUT YOUR LAST BITCH!.. I gave her mad cock, she was that hot
She even nicknamed my dick ‘Epidural’.. cuz it made her legs numb right after the backshot
The mag said it’s all eyes on this battle cuz someone’s gotta lose
They’re looking for answers across the board.. well they’ll need a ouija to get a response outta you
Drive-by your hood. Let off shots so you can die for good
Then I’ll get praised for what I did to Dominate with the 9 iron - Tiger Woods
Contract killer. Your mother, brothers and ya cousins get tagged
Crime scene? More like a plasma center, cuz I even got paid for putting blood in a bag
You an easy kill. Calm down and stay in your lane soldier
Tug Of War - you better get a grip cuz as soon as you cross that line, it’s game over

16

[Dominate]

One things certain, somebody is taking their first & last L of the season.

I laugh at the idea of someone believing this clown’s better
LOL - You’ll take the first and last L… i.e. you’ll be Leaving this Round Letter
Ur first 2 bars against Spree were OK - rest belonged in the trash can, goof
That Material went on the Wayne so much it resembled a Batman Suit
Now u better quit talking dweeb. I’m on ya porch waving & it ain’t no small machine
Shotty to your mug - that Pumpkin get a whole Face Lit Up like it’s Halloween
Any woman would bench him. One punch & I’ll end this round
I’m getting Lett down easy. He’s getting “I just see us as friends for now”
Got nothing but played and recycled bars - that really cements this herb’s fate
Forget Dr Who - this Tardis Taking us Back in Time whenever he attempts a wordplay
And Ghostwriters can’t help him against these beast mode writes
Sub Let for ANY Boarder… he still ain’t getting a New Lease on life
Calls himself “Young Simba”… I got a piece for this mark
& when he’s Running Into THIS Desert, it won’t just be Leaving a Scar
In a fistfight he’d get slumped too - dude is barely at chest height
He can’t beat me w/ bars, ‘Let alone w/ his hands’ - that shit compares w/ his sex life

[Barcotic]

Got a mil on the waist. Keep talking tough & I will let it raise
This can only go left like Zoolander.. & that was confirmed when I blew steel in his face
Nah. Wording issues, corny issues
They gave a jobber the belt. Ill prove this bum is weak
You gotta know your roleplayer.. now watch how they switch up after Dom gets beat
Nah. Decent enough wp. but I dont like what you did w/ it
Acts tough but he’s a creep. Guess it’s hard to admit
But I know you’re far from pussy, cuz he’s not allowed to be within 100 yards of a chick
Too many variations of this been done before it + this is a long winded one
BUT YOUR LAST BITCH!.. I gave her mad cock, she was that hot
She even nicknamed my dick ‘Epidural’.. cuz it made her legs numb right after the backshot
Okok. Better...and even better if you scratched 'right'
The mag said it’s all eyes on this battle cuz someone’s gotta lose
They’re looking for answers across the board.. well they’ll need a ouija to get a response outta you
Mad potential here. Again tho, wording issues. Just decent as is
Drive-by your hood. Let off shots so you can die for good
Then I’ll get praised for what I did to Dominate with the 9 iron - Tiger Woods
Fire! Leaps and bounds higher w/ your wording too
Contract killer. Your mother, brothers and ya cousins get tagged
Crime scene? More like a plasma center, cuz I even got paid for putting blood in a bag
Tf? No
You an easy kill. Calm down and stay in your lane soldier
Tug Of War - you better get a grip cuz as soon as you cross that line, it’s game over
Fiiiiiiller

I laugh at the idea of someone believing this clown’s better
LOL - You’ll take the first and last L… i.e. you’ll be Leaving this Round Letter
This is insane, wtf? Mad creativity. I love this
Ur first 2 bars against Spree were OK - rest belonged in the trash can, goof
That Material went on the Wayne so much it resembled a Batman Suit
Fire
Now u better quit talking dweeb. I’m on ya porch waving & it ain’t no small machine
Shotty to your mug - that Pumpkin get a whole Face Lit Up like it’s Halloween
Nah. Old, mainstream-like idea here
Any woman would bench him. One punch & I’ll end this round
I’m getting Lett down easy. He’s getting “I just see us as friends for now”
Decent
Got nothing but played and recycled bars - that really cements this herb’s fate
Forget Dr Who - this Tardis Taking us Back in Time whenever he attempts a wordplay
Lol. Good
And Ghostwriters can’t help him against these beast mode writes
Sub Let for ANY Boarder… he still ain’t getting a New Lease on life
Not feeling this one. Feels like your 3rd one
Calls himself “Young Simba”… I got a piece for this mark
& when he’s Running Into THIS Desert, it won’t just be Leaving a Scar
Dope flip
In a fistfight he’d get slumped too - dude is barely at chest height
He can’t beat me w/ bars, ‘Let alone w/ his hands’ - that shit compares w/ his sex life
Pffffft. You stupid for this one but its still good

Dom wins
Dom i would love to battle u again

[Exalted.]

Got a mil on the waist. Keep talking tough & I will let it raise
This can only go left like Zoolander.. & that was confirmed when I blew steel in his face
Not bad for a Zoolander concept, but meh

They gave a jobber the belt. Ill prove this bum is weak
You gotta know your roleplayer.. now watch how they switch up after Dom gets beat
Would like to end a lil different. Aight.

Acts tough but he’s a creep. Guess it’s hard to admit
But I know you’re far from pussy, cuz he’s not allowed to be within 100 yards of a chick
i didnt like this one.. corny as a diss

BUT YOUR LAST BITCH!.. I gave her mad cock, she was that hot
She even nicknamed my dick ‘Epidural’.. cuz it made her legs numb right after the backshot
Feels familiar, but This one was cool i thought, straight

The mag said it’s all eyes on this battle cuz someone’s gotta lose
They’re looking for answers across the board.. well they’ll need a ouija to get a response outta you
Didnt like how you ended it... oujia board concepts have been done too

Drive-by your hood. Let off shots so you can die for good
Then I’ll get praised for what I did to Dominate with the 9 iron - Tiger Woods
Liked it. Good bar.

Contract killer. Your mother, brothers and ya cousins get tagged
Crime scene? More like a plasma center, cuz I even got paid for putting blood in a bag
ehh, needed something more here IMO

You an easy kill. Calm down and stay in your lane soldier
Tug Of War - you better get a grip cuz as soon as you cross that line, it’s game over
Boring to me.

I laugh at the idea of someone believing this clown’s better
LOL - You’ll take the first and last L… i.e. you’ll be Leaving this Round Letter
off the bat - Good. Using the quote and personal, this was a nice start

Ur first 2 bars against Spree were OK - rest belonged in the trash can, goof
That Material went on the Wayne so much it resembled a Batman Suit
Cool, never seen the Wayne done like this, another hitter

Now u better quit talking dweeb. I’m on ya porch waving & it ain’t no small machine
Shotty to your mug - that Pumpkin get a whole Face Lit Up like it’s Halloween
So so, might be something in a live battle.. in text not so much

Any woman would bench him. One punch & I’ll end this round
I’m getting Lett down easy. He’s getting “I just see us as friends for now”
Ok, only thing i seen this variation on letterman, still decent

Got nothing but played and recycled bars - that really cements this herb’s fate
Forget Dr Who - this Tardis Taking us Back in Time whenever he attempts a wordplay
liked it when i seen it & did it before lol.
But still good just lessened b/c ive seen a few plays before of this actually

And Ghostwriters can’t help him against these beast mode writes
Sub Let for ANY Boarder… he still ain’t getting a New Lease on life
Decent, new lease on life was a solid flip here

Calls himself “Young Simba”… I got a piece for this mark
& when he’s Running Into THIS Desert, it won’t just be Leaving a Scar
Good here w/ running into desert.. I just dont think he calls himself Simba? If he does.. alright lol. Cool.

In a fistfight he’d get slumped too - dude is barely at chest height
He can’t beat me w/ bars, ‘Let alone w/ his hands’ - that shit compares w/ his sex life
Not a bad closer, and name flip

Dom got it here, his verse had a more personal edge & more originality which is points for me while Let was generic.. even outside of that Dom had the better overall bars compared to Lett. It was closer on first read not so much after a few

Vote Dom

[Plot]

Got Dom in this battle with fresher concepts.
I couldnt get into Zoolander as a movie so Let,s opener is amiss for me, roleplayer was a good flip, 100 yards bar was old material. Didnt like backshot but the ouiji bar was well worded with the board plays. Wasnt feeling the Tiger Woods, was it Dom in 8? Idk? Liked blood bag good wording and cross the line was set up well but fell flat.
Doms opener was gas, wayne was ill, halloween had great connections. Lett down i didnt really like but it was a creative angle dr who seemed old but well done. Sub let, simba and closer were just ok. But wording was nice

[Cody Nash]

Got a mil on the waist. Keep talking tough & I will let it raise
This can only go left like Zoolander.. & that was confirmed when I blew steel in his face
lol'ed at that one.. I think I've heard blue steel flips in actual songs but this was slick for text
They gave a jobber the belt. Ill prove this bum is weak
You gotta know your roleplayer.. now watch how they switch up after Dom gets beat
cool concept
Acts tough but he’s a creep. Guess it’s hard to admit
But I know you’re far from pussy, cuz he’s not allowed to be within 100 yards of a chick
haaaa.. this was dope
BUT YOUR LAST BITCH!.. I gave her mad cock, she was that hot
She even nicknamed my dick ‘Epidural’.. cuz it made her legs numb right after the backshot
damn, I feel like you're on a roll here.. good punch and concept
The mag said it’s all eyes on this battle cuz someone’s gotta lose
They’re looking for answers across the board.. well they’ll need a ouija to get a response outta you
nah, didn't like that one
Drive-by your hood. Let off shots so you can die for good
Then I’ll get praised for what I did to Dominate with the 9 iron - Tiger Woods
felt a bit dated/basic
Contract killer. Your mother, brothers and ya cousins get tagged
Crime scene? More like a plasma center, cuz I even got paid for putting blood in a bag
wasn't feelin' this one either conceptually
You an easy kill. Calm down and stay in your lane soldier
Tug Of War - you better get a grip cuz as soon as you cross that line, it’s game over
didn't connect for me

vs

I laugh at the idea of someone believing this clown’s better
LOL - You’ll take the first and last L… i.e. you’ll be Leaving this Round Letter
this was nice
Ur first 2 bars against Spree were OK - rest belonged in the trash can, goof
That Material went on the Wayne so much it resembled a Batman Suit
aight
Now u better quit talking dweeb. I’m on ya porch waving & it ain’t no small machine
Shotty to your mug - that Pumpkin get a whole Face Lit Up like it’s Halloween
aight, I like the concept and wording, felt a bit like a "you can get shot" threat and less like a punch?
Any woman would bench him. One punch & I’ll end this round
I’m getting Lett down easy. He’s getting “I just see us as friends for now”
lol'ed this was nice
Got nothing but played and recycled bars - that really cements this herb’s fate
Forget Dr Who - this Tardis Taking us Back in Time whenever he attempts a wordplay
lmao. cool.. haven't seen that before
And Ghostwriters can’t help him against these beast mode writes
Sub Let for ANY Boarder… he still ain’t getting a New Lease on life
eh.. not feeling that
Calls himself “Young Simba”… I got a piece for this mark
& when he’s Running Into THIS Desert, it won’t just be Leaving a Scar
aight, cool.. old concept but okay execution
In a fistfight he’d get slumped too - dude is barely at chest height
He can’t beat me w/ bars, ‘Let alone w/ his hands’ - that shit compares w/ his sex life
slick wording. concept is just okay

it's wild cause I feel like Letterman made me actually laugh out loud and had some HEAVY connects in the first half of his verse. dude was on a roll for me then the back end of the verse just fell off imo. Dom had more consistent connects throughout the verse and less misses. I think Dom just barely edges it honestly. if Letterman had like a few okay punches at the end or 1-2 more haymakers I may have gone for him. It's close though.

Vote Dom

[Spree]

Dom wins