Round 1 - 3.Fresh vs 14.R!canTheoryz (Fresh wins.)

[Phalanx]

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Saturday and will be open until Monday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16 (unless higher limit agreed upon)
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.


Check ins are mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ.

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@Fresh @R!canTheoryz

[Fresh]

im thinking 10

[R!canTheoryz]

10 is good.

[Fresh]

get mad all u want, it's now the day u get crushed
we'll see em Grit Teeth after i pound his face into dust
faggot loves womens clothes, it's something he's toyin with
if he praying to Gaudy hopin not to get caught in flamboyant shit

Stop being a girl & drop your verse Faggit.

called urself a faggot, u about to become a dead clown
u told a pair a' lies so you'll end up like that from the neck down
fuck u up for entertainment, watch him shake as i order the dude a hearse
if anyone thinks hell sitcom they must be from an alternate universe
what a little Bitch.. i should smash that melon, dude
he wont Complacancy the finish line unless i write for and tell him to

[R!canTheoryz]

Ext.

[R!canTheoryz]

Guess what’s in store For ya health i be the Coldest wit Help,
Nobody cares about whatever fresh produce your materials stay the oldest on the Shelf.
You just a Lame Bitch. You ain’t a killer never Shot to save shit,
You’ll really understand concrete thoughts after I finish stomping ya head across the pavement.
Never been in a kitchen. the type to beef or handle a scorching fued,
Plus only time you ever see fresh on the scales is when he’s portioning Food.
Bullying is somebody u Can say that i Mistreat for free Bitch quit please.
Can’t take your well being serious when you spend most ya time moderating staff in league for free!!
get ya facts straight Pull Up & You Can Get You & ya men misplaced,
Now you’ll know what 50/50 vision is after I finish punchin your glasses completely into your Face.

[KnowP]

get mad all u want, it's now the day u get crushed
we'll see em Grit Teeth after i pound his face into dust
pretty weak
faggot loves womens clothes, it's something he's toyin with
if he praying to Gaudy hopin not to get caught in flamboyant shit
lol good wp

Quote Originally Posted by R!canTheoryz View Post
Stop being a girl & drop your verse Faggit.

called urself a faggot, u about to become a dead clown
u told a pair a' lies so you'll end up like that from the neck down
punch ended up too predicatble. could of flipped it better
fuck u up for entertainment, watch him shake as i order the dude a hearse
if anyone thinks hell sitcom they must be from an alternate universe
weak flip on an old concept
what a little Bitch.. i should smash that melon, dude
he wont Complacancy the finish line unless i write for and tell him to
missed this punch imo. like the wp attempt tho.



vs



Guess what’s in store For ya health i be the Coldest wit Help,
Nobody cares about whatever fresh produce your materials stay the oldest on the Shelf.
could of been fire but ended flat
You just a Lame Bitch. You ain’t a killer never Shot to save shit,
You’ll really understand concrete thoughts after I finish stomping ya head across the pavement.
light. a better setup would of helped the punch land harder
Never been in a kitchen. the type to beef or handle a scorching fued,
Plus only time you ever see fresh on the scales is when he’s portioning Food.
nice
Bullying is somebody u Can say that i Mistreat for free Bitch quit please.
Can’t take your well being serious when you spend most ya time moderating staff in league for free!!
naw lame
get ya facts straight Pull Up & You Can Get You & ya men misplaced,
Now you’ll know what 50/50 vision is after I finish punchin your glasses completely into your Face.
ehhh light jab


weak bars overall. got Fresh with the haymaker but that was it honeslty. Rican had a couple decent punches.

v. rican

[Phalanx]

get mad all u want, it's now the day u get crushed
we'll see em Grit Teeth after i pound his face into dust
Decent word association jab.
faggot loves womens clothes, it's something he's toyin with
if he praying to Gaudy hopin not to get caught in flamboyant shit
Light but funny jab.


called urself a faggot, u about to become a dead clown
u told a pair a' lies so you'll end up like that from the neck down
This was dope w/the personal tie in.
fuck u up for entertainment, watch him shake as i order the dude a hearse
if anyone thinks hell sitcom they must be from an alternate universe
Not feeling this.
what a little Bitch.. i should smash that melon, dude
he wont Complacancy the finish line unless i write for and tell him to
This whiffed kind of hard, bro.

Guess what’s in store For ya health i be the Coldest wit Help,
Nobody cares about whatever fresh produce your materials stay the oldest on the Shelf.
The elements are there. But was to wordy to be effective.
You just a Lame Bitch. You ain’t a killer never Shot to save shit,
You’ll really understand concrete thoughts after I finish stomping ya head across the pavement.
This didn't do much for me. Felt rushed execution-wise.
Never been in a kitchen. the type to beef or handle a scorching fued,
Plus only time you ever see fresh on the scales is when he’s portioning Food.
Light jab. Execution could be tighter.
Bullying is somebody u Can say that i Mistreat for free Bitch quit please.
Can’t take your well being serious when you spend most ya time moderating staff in league for free!!
This bar was a mess. Wasted set up. Wordy punch that hinged on a dated personal.
get ya facts straight Pull Up & You Can Get You & ya men misplaced,
Now you’ll know what 50/50 vision is after I finish punchin your glasses completely into your Face.
This wasnt bad.

Neither was on their a game. That said, I got Fresh edging it off the strength of his first six lines.

Vote - Fresh.

[Exalted.]

get mad all u want, it's now the day u get crushed
we'll see em Grit Teeth after i pound his face into dust
Light
faggot loves womens clothes, it's something he's toyin with
if he praying to Gaudy hopin not to get caught in flamboyant shit
Like the wp, execution was so so w/ the diss here
Quote Originally Posted by R!canTheoryz View Post
Stop being a girl & drop your verse Faggit.
called urself a faggot, u about to become a dead clown
u told a pair a' lies so you'll end up like that from the neck down
played..
fuck u up for entertainment, watch him shake as i order the dude a hearse
if anyone thinks hell sitcom they must be from an alternate universe
wording ok but eh
what a little Bitch.. i should smash that melon, dude
he wont Complacancy the finish line unless i write for and tell him to
doesn't work both ways, didn't care for the wp

Rican opener was aight
rest was played or wording was off

vote Fresh I guess

[Letterman]

Fresh, the gaudy bar was good. LOTB to me. The opener was average. The paralyze and sitcom ones are older concepts that you didn’t really flip fresh enough for me to give points for.

Rican, the fresh produce line is an older concept that I don’t feel you flipped any differently than used in the past. I actually used one of those against Fresh many years ago. Concrete thoughts was ok. Portioning food.. ehh. The last two I’m not really feeling either.

Expected this battle to be better from both sides but I do have fresh winning with the LOTB.

v/Fresh

[plethora]

Paralyze?? C'mon fresh u know better smh. Played/forced punches thru out this battle
After reading fresh verse thought Rican had a good chance to take this but he didn't. Gaudy was lotb


V-fresh

[Plot]

Probably the best ive seem from RC, in terms of wording even though some were off problem was alot of the covepts were so old. The concrete ideas bar is like last century and wasnt flipped so... Fresh wasnt that good here either but the Gaudi concept was dope so he wins for me.

[Spree]

Grit teeth was decent

faggot loves womens clothes, it's something he's toyin with
if he praying to Gaudy hopin not to get caught in flamboyant shit


Vs

This was decent


Both verses were lackluster. Rican had better concepts worded poorly and fresh had one strong bar and a light jab worded nice. Also had the personal attempt but paralyze ruined it. I got fresh his misses were better I guess

V/Fresh

[Phalanx]

Fresh wins 6-1.