Originally Posted by
Justice Grimm
Ya glow’s fading homie. You’ll get no votes when I wash it away
Voters gonna check for Pleth aura, but find flies buzzin n his body in a state of decay
Cool np idea. Set up well. This was dece
Truth is you’re nothing special. I’ve beat better, leave u rattled n thin
Watch u Mimic the Plot tryna win… but end up the same as my battles with them
Ehhh it's OK. Self personals are never as good as regular personals, and "mimic the plot" is kind of a weird thing to say. This one's a bit of a stretch for me
J known for smart flips, but mind games gon make you wish you’d have walked
Even if you rolled up on my writer’s block ya sharpest lines’d get traced out in chalk
Cool ideas but the 'writers block' thing has been done
See this text shit’s a game, but I’ll ravage ya rep just for fun
Soon as u think you’re a star? I’ll have things goin sideways fast as a Mario level with one
Nice! I like this 'going sideways' wp - creative... LOL you could have flipped his line from last week that was flipping my line from the week before about being a Star... We could have had Flipception here. Still like this a lot but that feels like a missed opportunity hahaha
Plus these mags got u gassed. If you think you got skills? Then take a W, nab it
Cause if I’m ranked in the middle of the pack I’ll bring the smoke… along with a pack a day habit
wp is OK but I don't like the 'pack a day habit' flip/ending, think you could have found something punchier for that... even just wording it to say HE has a pack a day habit/addiction or something would be better IMO
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