12 lines. Due Monday.
Check in w/ picture.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/atta...8&d=1635643509
@Kill Spree
Phalanx
Kill Spree
12 lines. Due Monday.
Check in w/ picture.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/atta...8&d=1635643509
@Kill Spree
Last edited by Phalanx; December 21st, 2022 at 10:18 AM
Need ext till tomorrow
@Kill Spree Extension granted.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/atta...9&d=1635810679
Spree's easy to spot in a crowd...He's real rotten sight..
And if we're ranking bars? You know you're in the bottom right?
Yeah your position in the picture pulls parallels to your grind as a rapper
Always in the front lines....but never really an important part or a factor
You got the kind of friends that are confused on which bathroom to potty
But I'm glad your used to drag....Cuz you'll need them to do that with ya body
Spree lives for this net shit...Couldn't even put it down to pose for the pic
Nah he's to busy refreshing his battles to see if anyone voted his shit
Looking like the the Ringleader married the bearded lady n had a perfect bash
And you got to be the sad clown in the tent to complete the circus act
This is this saggy-skinned-flabby-chin-having faggots end He aint posting no heat
His verses be like his facial features..most of its cheeks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/atta...8&d=1635643509
Listen fucko
Got guns like Flava Flav… They get Loud when they Buck
& I ain’t talkin that Clock when it’s Time to put Rounds to your Gut
Fuck this Twiggy, skinny, faggot screaming like “HE’S WILD”
When Landscapers describe him as the only Stick in the Leaf pile
Spree Hydrate on fine wines. 2 bottles good.. but 3 or mores slaughter
Being successful’s Quenching, & the looks of your grass you can’t afford water
My sides, side bitch got a house of diamonds. I go nut & run-quick
You look over your right shoulder,..cross the street & fuck your cousin!
The nerve of you talkin tough! Ill break your face with ease
Then kick your legs till the bones look like your faded jeans
Fuckin punk keep talkin & I’ll leave a crook in your spine
The shadow had nothing to do with you falling after this hook from behind
Spree's easy to spot in a crowd...He's real rotten sight..
And if we're ranking bars? You know you're in the bottom right?
decent
Yeah your position in the picture pulls parallels to your grind as a rapper
Always in the front lines....but never really an important part or a factor
nah
You got the kind of friends that are confused on which bathroom to potty
But I'm glad your used to drag....Cuz you'll need them to do that with ya body
aight, I lol'ed
Spree lives for this net shit...Couldn't even put it down to pose for the pic
Nah he's to busy refreshing his battles to see if anyone voted his shit
haha i like that
Looking like the the Ringleader married the bearded lady n had a perfect bash
And you got to be the sad clown in the tent to complete the circus act
lol
This is this saggy-skinned-flabby-chin-having faggots end He aint posting no heat
His verses be like his facial features..most of its cheeks
felt lazy on the wording but made me smirk
vs
Listen fucko
Got guns like Flava Flav… They get Loud when they Buck
& I ain’t talkin that Clock when it’s Time to put Rounds to your Gut
dope punch, direct
Fuck this Twiggy, skinny, faggot screaming like “HE’S WILD”
When Landscapers describe him as the only Stick in the Leaf pile
ehhh aight
Spree Hydrate on fine wines. 2 bottles good.. but 3 or mores slaughter
Being successful’s Quenching, & the looks of your grass you can’t afford water
back to back punches about the landscape around him felt eh, but I lol'ed at this one harder
My sides, side bitch got a house of diamonds. I go nut & run-quick
You look over your right shoulder,..cross the street & fuck your cousin!
ehh, weak wording, I wanted more from it when I hit the punchline lol
The nerve of you talkin tough! Ill break your face with ease
Then kick your legs till the bones look like your faded jeans
aight lol decent
Fuckin punk keep talkin & I’ll leave a crook in your spine
The shadow had nothing to do with you falling after this hook from behind
ehh wasn't feelin this one
Maaan you both had some connects in there. I could see this going either way. Handful I didn't like much on both sides but there were some hard hitters too. I feel like Phal had the heaviest of the punches and made me laugh the most. came down to like one punch for me and I liked both for the most part really. good work gents!! lookin' forward to more battles in here.
vote Phalanx, felt like he came just slightly stronger. could go either way though.
I read through this and I just wanted to give you both props there was a good amount of enjoyable bars in both and sense I can't vote I'm not gonna even rack my brain on who won or why 1. I know it doesn't matter yet 2. It did appear close so I would feel responsible for really justifying why I chose whoever I would of chose. Some hard shit in both the verses.
Yeah your position in the picture pulls parallels to your grind as a rapper
Always in the front lines....but never really an important part or a factor
You got the kind of friends that are confused on which bathroom to potty
But I'm glad your used to drag....Cuz you'll need them to do that with ya body
vs
Got guns like Flava Flav… They get Loud when they Buck
& I ain’t talkin that Clock when it’s Time to put Rounds to your Gut
The nerve of you talkin tough! Ill break your face with ease
Then kick your legs till the bones look like your faded jeans
Fuckin punk keep talkin & I’ll leave a crook in your spine
The shadow had nothing to do with you falling after this hook from behind
decent battle here but overall i felt sprees was harsher and had 1 more that stood out to me
v/ KS
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...=1#post8950607
@Phalanx heres a voting link
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...OPEN-FOR-VOTES
-Spree
Both had great punchlines,
I saw some slick lines in both vs
I felt like Kill vs more dope
Vote kill
Spree's easy to spot in a crowd...He's real rotten sight..
And if we're ranking bars? You know you're in the bottom right?
lite jab
Yeah your position in the picture pulls parallels to your grind as a rapper
Always in the front lines....but never really an important part or a factor
lite again
You got the kind of friends that are confused on which bathroom to potty
But I'm glad your used to drag....Cuz you'll need them to do that with ya body
too predictable. lite.
Spree lives for this net shit...Couldn't even put it down to pose for the pic
Nah he's to busy refreshing his battles to see if anyone voted his shit
lmao
Looking like the the Ringleader married the bearded lady n had a perfect bash
And you got to be the sad clown in the tent to complete the circus act
ehhh not feelin it
This is this saggy-skinned-flabby-chin-having faggots end He aint posting no heat
His verses be like his facial features..most of its cheeks
lol aight. not hard but funny
vs
Listen fucko
Got guns like Flava Flav… They get Loud when they Buck
& I ain’t talkin that Clock when it’s Time to put Rounds to your Gut
gun bars bang!
Fuck this Twiggy, skinny, faggot screaming like “HE’S WILD”
When Landscapers describe him as the only Stick in the Leaf pile
lame
Spree Hydrate on fine wines. 2 bottles good.. but 3 or mores slaughter
Being successful’s Quenching, & the looks of your grass you can’t afford water
lol aight
My sides, side bitch got a house of diamonds. I go nut & run-quick
You look over your right shoulder,..cross the street & fuck your cousin!
lol
The nerve of you talkin tough! Ill break your face with ease
Then kick your legs till the bones look like your faded jeans
nawww
Fuckin punk keep talkin & I’ll leave a crook in your spine
The shadow had nothing to do with you falling after this hook from behind
set up could of helped this hit hard but i get it. decent punch
lots of lite punches from both but spree hard better bars overall that connect with the pic. close one to call.
vote kill spree
Phalanx:
there was a couple of other good lines like the circus tent one i dug.. the structure was tight in my language its a bit looser then what i like using but it was fire for what it was.. which i think the general vocab you used was high quality for being general vocab in the first place the use and placement of it was on point which made for a spot on verse.. pretty cool some personals some gun play type ish you know the thugg out gangster rape image shit like the what to do with the body line.. all in all cool..
fav line:
You got the kind of friends that are confused on which bathroom to potty
kill spree:
very original type battle text vs alot of punches that did land even in the literal sense.. the description and caption of the picture you seemed to allow and supply more to.. vocab was a little under par to p's but you did have an aite intro.. the structure was a like a syllable or two tigghter which i actually think flow wise really gave you the edge there.. all in all cool showing..
fav line:
You look over your right shoulder,..cross the street & fuck your cousin! - the build up to this line was what made it extra special lol
vote = Phalanx
it came down to flow vs substance and im a sucker for a better portrayed story over quirky punches to a tighter flow.. gl
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Spree's easy to spot in a crowd...He's real rotten sight..
And if we're ranking bars? You know you're in the bottom right?
solid
Yeah your position in the picture pulls parallels to your grind as a rapper
Always in the front lines....but never really an important part or a factor
ehh.. you kinda just restated and elaborated on the last punch without doing much else imo
You got the kind of friends that are confused on which bathroom to potty
But I'm glad your used to drag....Cuz you'll need them to do that with ya body
Basic pun, but it’s effective enough
Spree lives for this net shit...Couldn't even put it down to pose for the pic
Nah he's to busy refreshing his battles to see if anyone voted his shit
it do be like that lol
Looking like the the Ringleader married the bearded lady n had a perfect bash
And you got to be the sad clown in the tent to complete the circus act
perfect bash is a lazy set up imo. I don’t really see the comparison either. Your worst bar imo
This is this saggy-skinned-flabby-chin-having faggots end He aint posting no heat
His verses be like his facial features..most of its cheeks
less is more with multis sometimes. The punch itself is pretty light. Solid verse but you didn’t end on a strong note.
VS
Listen fucko
Got guns like Flava Flav… They get Loud when they Buck
& I ain’t talkin that Clock when it’s Time to put Rounds to your Gut
I hate Daylyt for bringing “rounds” bars into existence for things that are round but aren’t actually called “rounds”. Good flow and structure though
Fuck this Twiggy, skinny, faggot screaming like “HE’S WILD”
When Landscapers describe him as the only Stick in the Leaf pile
ehh, jokey but not super funny
Spree Hydrate on fine wines. 2 bottles good.. but 3 or mores slaughter
Being successful’s Quenching, & the looks of your grass you can’t afford water
awkward wording in the setup, not a great punch
My sides, side bitch got a house of diamonds. I go nut & run-quick
You look over your right shoulder,..cross the street & fuck your cousin!
nahhh, not great
The nerve of you talkin tough! Ill break your face with ease
Then kick your legs till the bones look like your faded jeans
Definitely should’ve roasted those jeans better than that
Fuckin punk keep talkin & I’ll leave a crook in your spine
The shadow had nothing to do with you falling after this hook from behind
ehhh, kinda reachy. I get that the horn looks like a hook and his shadow’s on the ground, but idk if I would’ve ended on it
This is pretty close. Spree had better flow, for sure. Punches went to phalanx by a slight nod. His opener was the best bar of the battle imo. I also think he used the pic more effectively, so
Vote- Phalanx
3-3
Good work from both
I enjoy reading both
Both had decent bars
I felt like Kill Spree vs more creative compare to Phal
Vote- Kill