WK 12: Enbombz Vs SlowHands[Enbombz wins]

[Spree]

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@Enbombz @Slowhands

[Slowhands]

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[Slowhands]

12

Dog, my scanner went bezerk, this isnt a weekly test its an amber alert
so i'll hand in this perp, for kidnapping
...every time one glance at his verse
with these hands im the worst, u aint heavy weight, full of fright n piss
you couldnt pass for dope if brock lesnar combo'd you with his vitamins
just a pile of shit with his pilot pen, the smell of envy is hurtin this geek
you got a minute to champ as the crow flies ...
...but even they been circling for weeks
ya girl been hurting for cream, i'll trump that ace with permission to beat
so while u simply copywrites, i'll be given an intro while rippin some queen
even england is weak, E U are bad with words when its comparing w/ me
so while u hope to bridge the gap on your extra super long stretched punches of flow to land
....i just want your ferry to sink
your nothing scary to me, dunno how you champed but u can pack it up
maybe i just dont understand the language
so pardon my french but its wak as fuck

[Enbombz]

cool

[Enbombz]

Damn, no love on my no show verse. Still liked the mag, jordan memes never get old

- - - Updated - - -

Last week you flirted with violence, but don't be pretending that ya tough,
Now ya complain there's no love for ya punches, Dude..They were affectionate enough!
Ya word plays criminal, punchlines subliminal, just fuckin stop
Im a nice guy but you still catching shots when I see ya Hands like crooked cops
I'll drop you n ya crew, leave all ya bredren on they back
I got the drive to take down a whole crowd, Nice terrorist attack
son when it comes this text i father dudes
let the truth sear'em..these flames got slow cooked like texas bbq,
My punches ensure ya face lift, already decided the course its takin
If I Catch this man solo we' gonna see Han die like the Force Awakens,
Info wasn't wrong, so you got kids huh? then I want 'em gone
Bombz'll Run up on Slow children n drop those retards one by one

[KnowP]

with these hands im the worst, u aint heavy weight, full of fright n piss
you couldnt pass for dope if brock lesnar combo'd you with his vitamins
just a pile of shit with his pilot pen, the smell of envy is hurtin this geek
you got a minute to champ as the crow flies ...
...but even they been circling for weeks
ya girl been hurting for cream, i'll trump that ace with permission to beat
so while u simply copywrites, i'll be given an intro while rippin some queen



vs


Ya word plays criminal, punchlines subliminal, just fuckin stop
Im a nice guy but you still catching shots when I see ya Hands like crooked cops
son when it comes this text i father dudes
let the truth sear'em..these flames got slow cooked like texas bbq,
My punches ensure ya face lift, already decided the course its takin
If I Catch this man solo we' gonna see Han die like the Force Awakens,
Info wasn't wrong, so you got kids huh? then I want 'em gone
Bombz'll Run up on Slow children n drop those retards one by one



pretty good battle with some tight punches and some there were aight. nothin to critique really. just felt one had more hits than the other. good battle.


v. bombz

[Clout]

12

Dog, my scanner went bezerk, this isnt a weekly test its an amber alert
so i'll hand in this perp, for kidnapping
...every time one glance at his verse

See i appreciate the witty approach but this wasn't really carrying impact. I did like the play you went for. Kid napping/ kidnapping. But it wasn't harsh or carrying power.

with these hands im the worst, u aint heavy weight, full of fright n piss
you couldnt pass for dope if brock lesnar combo'd you with his vitamins

Slant rhymes not the biggest fan of. This isn't really a hard shot again, i feel like you were keying this. I seen you come much slicker & harsher. Your rhyme schemes for one are usually stellar. This bar seem unfinished like it was an idea jotted down but tossed to the way side.

just a pile of shit with his pilot pen, the smell of envy is hurtin this geek
you got a minute to champ as the crow flies ...
...but even they been circling for weeks

This was nice to me, there we go.

ya girl been hurting for cream, i'll trump that ace with permission to beat
so while u simply copywrites, i'll be given an intro while rippin some queen

Eh, i don't really like this one.

even england is weak, E U are bad with words when its comparing w/ me
so while u hope to bridge the gap on your extra super long stretched punches of flow to land

Loved the set up srsly did. The punch was ok, seem like you were playing on englands land mass elongated. I can respect it.

....i just want your ferry to sink
your nothing scary to me, dunno how you champed but u can pack it up
maybe i just dont understand the language
so pardon my french but its wak as fuck

Eh not a fan of your 3 line format you have going on. You come at him for stretched lines but when you line these two lines up lol they're stretched as well brother.

Last week you flirted with violence, but don't be pretending that ya tough,
Now ya complain there's no love for ya punches, Dude..They were affectionate enough!

This is cool nothing major.

Ya word plays criminal, punchlines subliminal, just fuckin stop
Im a nice guy but you still catching shots when I see ya Hands like crooked cops

Eh

I'll drop you n ya crew, leave all ya bredren on they back
I got the drive to take down a whole crowd, Nice terrorist attack

Seems lazy on execution, these have been done to death but atleast you didn't try to make nice be pronounced as nie-suh when its pronounced as nee-suh as in niece. So this is light tho.

son when it comes this text i father dudes
let the truth sear'em..these flames got slow cooked like texas bbq,

Set up seems like a fragmented typo? This bar was very weak. I feel like you are running out of ideas my friend.

My punches ensure ya face lift, already decided the course its takin
If I Catch this man solo we' gonna see Han die like the Force Awakens,

Eh, Forcing this a bit. I have an accent as well its no the Hahn-duh that bothers me, its you dropping the D off Hand lol. But this was ok, i can't really dock you for trying this our brother. This is ok nothing major.

Info wasn't wrong, so you got kids huh? then I want 'em gone
Bombz'll Run up on Slow children n drop those retards one by one

Slow/retards but bombs are known to wipe out crowds mate. But not too bad,


Ok, so i got enbombs sneaking this one out. He just had more lands while slowhands had LOTB. He just seemed off or uninterested in putting his best foot forward. Enbombs was constantly landing nothing was major but it was enough to rack up points to steal the show.

Vote:enbombz

[JEM.]

Slow:

Dog, my scanner went bezerk, this isnt a weekly test its an amber alert
so i'll hand in this perp, for kidnapping
...every time one glance at his verse
Haha, dope. Reminds me of a line straight from the RnR days.


with these hands im the worst, u aint heavy weight, full of fright n piss
you couldnt pass for dope if brock lesnar combo'd you with his vitamins
This was okay.

just a pile of shit with his pilot pen, the smell of envy is hurtin this geek
you got a minute to champ as the crow flies ...
...but even they been circling for weeks
Well done, perfectly written, stinger. Dope.

ya girl been hurting for cream, i'll trump that ace with permission to beat
so while u simply copywrites, i'll be given an intro while rippin some queen
even england is weak, E U are bad with words when its comparing w/ me
so while u hope to bridge the gap on your extra super long stretched punches of flow to land
....i just want your ferry to sink

Dope structuring, great scheme and multi bar build up. Not sure if everyone else got it, but nice.

your nothing scary to me, dunno how you champed but u can pack it up
maybe i just dont understand the language
so pardon my french but its wak as fuck

Just stepped off the intensity a bit, so it didn't kill as a closer, but not bad.



Bombz:

Last week you flirted with violence, but don't be pretending that ya tough,
Now ya complain there's no love for ya punches, Dude..They were affectionate enough!
lol, nice. Witty and sharp.


Ya word plays criminal, punchlines subliminal, just fuckin stop
Im a nice guy but you still catching shots when I see ya Hands like crooked cops
Eh, this was okay.

I'll drop you n ya crew, leave all ya bredren on they back
I got the drive to take down a whole crowd, Nice terrorist attack
No.


son when it comes this text i father dudes
let the truth sear'em..these flames got slow cooked like texas bbq,
Eh, this was okay.

My punches ensure ya face lift, already decided the course its takin
If I Catch this man solo we' gonna see Han die like the Force Awakens,
Um, this was alright. A bit forced.


Info wasn't wrong, so you got kids huh? then I want 'em gone
Bombz'll Run up on Slow children n drop those retards one by one
No.


I have slow winning this one quite comfortably. I am a fun of Bombz stuff I just didn't think it was his best effort. On the other hand, Slow, that was some vintage stuff right there. Reminded me of when witty, sarcasm, clever, well done lines carried day.

v/Slow.

[.SiQ.]

with these hands im the worst, u aint heavy weight, full of fright n piss
you couldnt pass for dope if brock lesnar combo'd you with his vitamins

vs

Last week you flirted with violence, but don't be pretending that ya tough,
Now ya complain there's no love for ya punches, Dude..They were affectionate enough
son when it comes this text i father dudes
let the truth sear'em..these flames got slow cooked like texas bbq,
My punches ensure ya face lift, already decided the course its takin
If I Catch this man solo we' gonna see Han die like the Force Awakens,
Info wasn't wrong, so you got kids huh? then I want 'em gone
Bombz'll Run up on Slow children n drop those retards one by one

- I felt SLOW's verse wasn't enough for BOMBZ... bombz had way too many haymakers, very consistent, def nice nameplay!

my vote: BOMBZ

[Bit 2 Byte]

SlowHandz

Dog, my scanner went bezerk, this isnt a weekly test its an amber alert
so i'll hand in this perp, for kidnapping
...every time one glance at his verse
Haha dope opener, sets a good tone, witty
with these hands im the worst, u aint heavy weight, full of fright n piss
you couldnt pass for dope if brock lesnar combo'd you with his vitamins
Dope line, well worded
just a pile of shit with his pilot pen, the smell of envy is hurtin this geek
you got a minute to champ as the crow flies ...
...but even they been circling for weeks
eh this was aiight
ya girl been hurting for cream, i'll trump that ace with permission to beat
so while u simply copywrites, i'll be given an intro while rippin some queen
nice line, bet some people didnt catch this one
even england is weak, E U are bad with words when its comparing w/ me
so while u hope to bridge the gap on your extra super long stretched punches of flow to land
....i just want your ferry to sink
DOPEEE, this punch was nasttyy, and you stretching out the bar was so well done
your nothing scary to me, dunno how you champed but u can pack it up
maybe i just dont understand the language
so pardon my french but its wak as fuck
eh decent closer, nothing special

Bombz

Last week you flirted with violence, but don't be pretending that ya tough,
Now ya complain there's no love for ya punches, Dude..They were affectionate enough!
ehh, weak opener
Ya word plays criminal, punchlines subliminal, just fuckin stop
Im a nice guy but you still catching shots when I see ya Hands like crooked cops
dope punch right here
I'll drop you n ya crew, leave all ya bredren on they back
I got the drive to take down a whole crowd, Nice terrorist attack
wack line
son when it comes this text i father dudes
let the truth sear'em..these flames got slow cooked like texas bbq,
the setup is missing a word, hate when people leave out a word to make the line flow better but the punch was nice
My punches ensure ya face lift, already decided the course its takin
If I Catch this man solo we' gonna see Han die like the Force Awakens,
decent line, the hans solo concept is played but it still hit
Info wasn't wrong, so you got kids huh? then I want 'em gone
Bombz'll Run up on Slow children n drop those retards one by one
this missed, could of been a dope ass punch but it was used poorly, setup well, just didnt execute the 2nd line/concept


@Clout
even england is weak, E U are bad with words when its comparing w/ me
so while u hope to bridge the gap on your extra super long stretched punches of flow to land
....i just want your ferry to sink

^^ Slowhandz stretched this line out on purpose, that was the point.. I hate to see someone vote and say "You come at him for stretched lines but when you line these two lines up lol they're stretched as well brother." Its very obvious you missed the point,

Im having trouble understanding some of the voting on this site, and this battle is a prime example, Bombz didnt have anything great in his verse, his best line for me was the crooked cops line and that wasnt that great. The slow cooked line was tight too.

But slowhandz from start to finish was really nice, opener was clever and well worded. Brock line was dope, and the line of the battle was the ferry to sink line.

V/ Slowhandz

[Stat.]

Slowhands
Dog, my scanner went bezerk, this isnt a weekly test its an amber alert
so i'll hand in this perp, for kidnapping
...every time one glance at his verse
with these hands im the worst, u aint heavy weight, full of fright n piss
you couldnt pass for dope if brock lesnar combo'd you with his vitamins


vs.

Enbombz
Last week you flirted with violence, but don't be pretending that ya tough,
Now ya complain there's no love for ya punches, Dude..They were affectionate enough!(LOTB)
Ya word plays criminal, punchlines subliminal, just fuckin stop
Im a nice guy but you still catching shots when I see ya Hands like crooked cops
My punches ensure ya face lift, already decided the course its takin
If I Catch this man solo we' gonna see Han die like the Force Awakens,
Info wasn't wrong, so you got kids huh? then I want 'em gone
Bombz'll Run up on Slow children n drop those retards one by one

Good battle here. Slow had some good lines but Bombz worked those nameplays.

Vote Enbombz

[Lemaitre]

Dog, my scanner went bezerk, this isnt a weekly test its an amber alert
so i'll hand in this perp, for kidnapping
...every time one glance at his verse
Fresh flip on an old idea. Nice.
with these hands im the worst, u aint heavy weight, full of fright n piss
you couldnt pass for dope if brock lesnar combo'd you with his vitamins
Aight use of a current event
just a pile of shit with his pilot pen, the smell of envy is hurtin this geek
you got a minute to champ as the crow flies ...
...but even they been circling for weeks
Nice, I liked this
ya girl been hurting for cream, i'll trump that ace with permission to beat
so while u simply copywrites, i'll be given an intro while rippin some queen
meh
even england is weak, E U are bad with words when its comparing w/ me
so while u hope to bridge the gap on your extra super long stretched punches of flow to land
....i just want your ferry to sink
I see what you were trying to do here but I didn't like it
your nothing scary to me, dunno how you champed but u can pack it up
maybe i just dont understand the language
so pardon my french but its wak as fuck
okish

Vs

Last week you flirted with violence, but don't be pretending that ya tough,
Now ya complain there's no love for ya punches, Dude..They were affectionate enough!
This was slick
Ya word plays criminal, punchlines subliminal, just fuckin stop
Im a nice guy but you still catching shots when I see ya Hands like crooked cops
dope
I'll drop you n ya crew, leave all ya bredren on they back
I got the drive to take down a whole crowd, Nice terrorist attack
Fresh use of this event, but it wasn't a hard punch
son when it comes this text i father dudes
let the truth sear'em..these flames got slow cooked like texas bbq,
Nah
My punches ensure ya face lift, already decided the course its takin
If I Catch this man solo we' gonna see Han die like the Force Awakens,
Nice idea but a little forced really.. ya can't just take a random 3 letters from dudes name and nameplay it. You got "S" "Slow" or "Hands" ya'll can't be using "han"
Info wasn't wrong, so you got kids huh? then I want 'em gone
Bombz'll Run up on Slow children n drop those retards one by one
Ehh.

Weird battle to read... Embombz started so good. But the end of his verse was wack for me. Wasn't feeling anything past the 3rd bar really. I honestly think his first 2 lines were better than Slowhands best lines, but Slow was more consistent and didn't have horrific misses.

V/Slowhands

[War Shack]

just a pile of shit with his pilot pen, the smell of envy is hurtin this geek
you got a minute to champ as the crow flies ...
...but even they been circling for weeks
with these hands im the worst, u aint heavy weight, full of fright n piss
you couldnt pass for dope if brock lesnar combo'd you with his vitamin

Vs

Last week you flirted with violence, but don't be pretending that ya tough,
Now ya complain there's no love for ya punches, Dude..They were affectionate enough!
Ya word plays criminal, punchlines subliminal, just fuckin stop
Im a nice guy but you still catching shots when I see ya Hands like crooked cops
Info wasn't wrong, so you got kids huh? then I want 'em gone
Bombz'll Run up on Slow children n drop those retards one by one

Vote Enbombz. I have bo bombz by a quote. But even still i think his misses were better. Liked his wording a bit more too

[KnowP]

bombz wins in a close one