Week 11: Enbombz Vs Letterman [Letterman wins]

[Spree]

DUE DATE
Due Dates is FRIDAY MIDNIGHT P.S.T.
Voting Due SUNDAY MIDNIGHT P.S.T.



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- Pic Battle Option -
If you want to do a pic battle, you and your opponent must agree in the check-ins
@Enbombz @Letterman

[Enbombz]

Checkinski

[Letterman]

Ok.

[Letterman]

I'll fly to England in peace & have to leave after smoking your ass
Cuz this brittle try to fight with me, but it's nothing to leave this frail faggot broken in half
This virgin does Nazi any pussy. You've never pulled a bitch with your mack
Cuz every chick pushes Bombz away.. dude gets shot down more than a blitzkrieg attack
You wouldnt be hard in the U.S. Ill buy your ticket, but we'll never see him
He'd never come pose a threat, the most he'd do is send a hate message to my PMs
He trailer park trash, so you as a gangsta? We not believing
I'll easily get this hick up outta here.. by giving him a chest shot that'll stop his breathing
Got a foreign shooter with the gats. We could show up to ur crib in a sec
You'll see me and a Cuban link at your crib to put the metal at your neck
But fuck guns. RPG aimed at your gut'll make this coward wither
The way you'll lose your center from the rockets, it'd make Dwight Howard reconsider

[KnowP]

bomb verse

letterman/mac a velli

It's been a bad year for you, no shows have gotten worse
Only Plus you can take out's through DQ n you still not dropped a verse,
I k'od you in fl, you had to hide behind an alias to match with me
I Don't give a fuck what Mac counter w/ it don't make up for that Faggotry
Bombs'll Put the knife to ya brain, just start slashing n smile
Leave so many parts of ya sub conscience in the cut, looks like i'm jackin ya style
U got astounding belief for guy out here drowning in beef
If you wanna Ruckson im taking out the biggest clown in The League
You define a hoe, minor blows type who's not inclined to show,
You being dope in the past, just mean you ain't won shit since time ago
Delt some truth, the heat im handling'll melt this dude
Just face it you lack the skillet, so this won't pan out well for you

[Slowhands]

Letterman

I'll fly to England in peace & have to leave after smoking your ass
Cuz this brittle try to fight with me, but it's nothing to leave this frail faggot broken in half
ok play
This virgin does Nazi any pussy. You've never pulled a bitch with your mack
Cuz every chick pushes Bombz away.. dude gets shot down more than a blitzkrieg attack
meh
You wouldnt be hard in the U.S. Ill buy your ticket, but we'll never see him
He'd never come pose a threat, the most he'd do is send a hate message to my PMs
ok
He trailer park trash, so you as a gangsta? We not believing
I'll easily get this hick up outta here.. by giving him a chest shot that'll stop his breathing
ok, lot of potential lost tho
Got a foreign shooter with the gats. We could show up to ur crib in a sec
You'll see me and a Cuban link at your crib to put the metal at your neck
nah
But fuck guns. RPG aimed at your gut'll make this coward wither
The way you'll lose your center from the rockets, it'd make Dwight Howard reconsider
ok

Felt like you had some good concepts but didn't deliver to max effect, while a couple other felt forced or just didn't hit hard. Not a bad verse just not consistent.


Enbombz

It's been a bad year for you, no shows have gotten worse
Only Plus you can take out's through DQ n you still not dropped a verse,
ok
I k'od you in fl, you had to hide behind an alias to match with me
I Don't give a fuck what Mac counter w/ it don't make up for that Faggotry
ok, but make up could have been incorp to be hard hittin
Bombs'll Put the knife to ya brain, just start slashing n smile
Leave so many parts of ya sub conscience in the cut, looks like i'm jackin ya style
meh
U got astounding belief for guy out here drowning in beef
If you wanna Ruckson im taking out the biggest clown in The League
dec
You define a hoe, minor blows type who's not inclined to show,
You being dope in the past, just mean you ain't won shit since time ago
typo? ok bar
Delt some truth, the heat im handling'll melt this dude
Just face it you lack the skillet, so this won't pan out well for you
meh

Decent verse and concepts, in retrospect i think you could see how some could be reworded to be hard hits instead of good hits. still a good read, felt like 2nd to last was typo but still understood, but it is text lol so fix that shit


overall i felt like enbombz had the better verse, his concepts to punches flowed better and seemed to have more personals against letterman. both verses were best in the middle, but lettermans didnt have the hit to match. still a good read, but vote is for enbombz

[Clout]

bomb verse

letterman/mac a velli

It's been a bad year for you, no shows have gotten worse
Only Plus you can take out's through DQ n you still not dropped a verse,

Eh worded funky on the punch.

I k'od you in fl, you had to hide behind an alias to match with me
I Don't give a fuck what Mac counter w/ it don't make up for that Faggotry

Eh soft
Bombs'll Put the knife to ya brain, just start slashing n smile
Leave so many parts of ya sub conscience in the cut, looks like i'm jackin ya style

Not bad

U got astounding belief for guy out here drowning in beef
If you wanna Ruckson im taking out the biggest clown in The League

I like the show, this could've been much harsher.

You define a hoe, minor blows type who's not inclined to show,
You being dope in the past, just mean you ain't won shit since time ago

Huh, I know English isn't my main language. But this is terribly worded lol.

Delt some truth, the heat im handling'll melt this dude
Just face it you lack the skillet, so this won't pan out well for you

Eh

I'll fly to England in peace & have to leave after smoking your ass
Cuz this brittle try to fight with me, but it's nothing to leave this frail faggot broken in half

Cool,
This virgin does Nazi any pussy. You've never pulled a bitch with your mack
Cuz every chick pushes Bombz away.. dude gets shot down more than a blitzkrieg attack

Eh, kind of played concepts. its light

You wouldnt be hard in the U.S. Ill buy your ticket, but we'll never see him
He'd never come pose a threat, the most he'd do is send a hate message to my PMs

No

He trailer park trash, so you as a gangsta? We not believing
I'll easily get this hick up outta here.. by giving him a chest shot that'll stop his breathing

Cool
Got a foreign shooter with the gats. We could show up to ur crib in a sec
You'll see me and a Cuban link at your crib to put the metal at your neck

Eh light
But fuck guns. RPG aimed at your gut'll make this coward wither
The way you'll lose your center from the rockets, it'd make Dwight Howard reconsider

Could've been worded harsher, not bad.



Well I have letterman taking this one. I'm not American either Bombs, but the way you worded some of your lines really came off wrong to me. I root for the foreign goons man! But I just couldn't get behind your jibe tonight. I thought letterman was stronger in his attempts and impact. You weren't really harsh or hard hitting. Letterman stay away from corny concepts that are an obvious "done to death" adage.

v/ Letterman jacket

[Stat.]

Letterman
Brittle opener was good.
Bombz away was ok.
Hate message was a miss.
Hick up was dope. (lotb)
Cuban link line was a miss.
Lose your center/Dwight Howard line was good.

vs.

Enbombz
Plus/DQ line was good.
Second bar was a miss.
Sub conscience in the cut line was eh.
I think you're referencing that one fantasy football show I have never watched. Miss.
Dope in the past line was ok
Skillet line was good. Felt you could've incorporated the 'it' in skillet somewhere.

Close call here. But I gotta say Letter had the stronger lines that landed. Good battle though guys.

Vote Letterman

[JEM.]

Letterman

I'll fly to England in peace & have to leave after smoking your ass
Cuz this brittle try to fight with me, but it's nothing to leave this frail faggot broken in half
This was okay.

This virgin does Nazi any pussy. You've never pulled a bitch with your mack
Cuz every chick pushes Bombz away.. dude gets shot down more than a blitzkrieg attack
Haha, very good.


You wouldnt be hard in the U.S. Ill buy your ticket, but we'll never see him
He'd never come pose a threat, the most he'd do is send a hate message to my PMs
Okay.


He trailer park trash, so you as a gangsta? We not believing
I'll easily get this hick up outta here.. by giving him a chest shot that'll stop his breathing
Dope.


Got a foreign shooter with the gats. We could show up to ur crib in a sec
You'll see me and a Cuban link at your crib to put the metal at your neck
Not bad.

But fuck guns. RPG aimed at your gut'll make this coward wither
The way you'll lose your center from the rockets, it'd make Dwight Howard reconsider
Nice.


Enbomz


It's been a bad year for you, no shows have gotten worse
Only Plus you can take out's through DQ n you still not dropped a verse,
Lol, did a bit of research and got the personal. Good.

I k'od you in fl, you had to hide behind an alias to match with me
I Don't give a fuck what Mac counter w/ it don't make up for that Faggotry
Haha, unlike most, I like the condescending-direct bars sometimes. Good change of pace from gun bars, and what not, that’s typically enjoyed on RB.


Bombs'll Put the knife to ya brain, just start slashing n smile
Leave so many parts of ya sub conscience in the cut, looks like i'm jackin ya style
Dope.


U got astounding belief for guy out here drowning in beef
If you wanna Ruckson im taking out the biggest clown in The League
Dope concept, well executed, but still feel just a bit flat.

You define a hoe, minor blows type who's not inclined to show,
You being dope in the past, just mean you ain't won shit since time ago
Eh, no.


Delt some truth, the heat im handling'll melt this dude
Just face it you lack the skillet, so this won't pan out well for you
This was okay.

Probably one of the tougher battles to vote on. For once, I read a battle that I felt read semi-well throughout and fundamental basic of english were not sacrificed for the sake of a bar. Concepts were well thought out, and I enjoyed the conciseness of both. In the end, I think it came down to who I think hit just a BIT harder… and I think that was letterman. If Bomz jacking ya style would have just hit a bit harder, how it should have, he would have had my vote.

v/Letterman

[A. Diction]

Lol @ Letterman winning with a verse full of played shit. Jeeeeeez. His closer was dope tho.

Bombz had a few good bars and should win.

[Spree]

3-1 letter lets get more votes

[Smog]

Letterman

Ur first 4 barz I've seen those plays man n u really didn't put s fresh twist on him.. Cuban link was cool n closer was fresh I liked those 2, but compose hick up n brittle I've seen plus I just did a bombz away on him...

Bombz

I like ur first 3 barz, ruckson son was ooook, dope in the past was ehh, n closer I've used before on P..

Basically comes down to 3-2 in favor of bombz.. Lotta played wp in this verse with not much of a different flip.. I thought let worded well but just felt he used too much played material in this one.. Close but I got bombz edging this..

Bombz

[KnowP]

3-2 letter wins