Jonny Blaze (0-1) vs Joe Boston (1-0) (Joe Boston Wins)

[Barcotic]

somewhat witty personal vs bland personal

v/boston

[Fresh]

ehh I dunno Joe your bar was formed weird. it had personal aspect but it could have been tweaked to have more impact.

Jonny your shit started out great and ended horribly. No substance yet again. Need to work on tying concepts together to give it more impact.

This is close but I gotta go with Joe

v/Joe Boston

[Spree]

Joes bar was a choppy read. Blaze had a played concept I've seen a gang of times. I think if blaze came with a more fresh concept he could take this but Joe had the personal on creds bar so I'm giving him the vote

V/joe

[Aero]

Both trash. Joe's was more corny so MVGT Blaze

[Cred]

Johnny came wit a statement. Bro incorporate some type of metaphor in there. I lol'd at a bit at joes, corny but better thrn blaze.

Vote jb

[Nahlidge]

Joe, I liked the concept, but it was worded trash lol. I was confused for a minute, thought you were missing a word or something.

Johnny, wasn't really feeling the punch. Too straight forward and not enough punch.

Vote - Joe Boston I thought both were a little lack luster. Joe's was worded sloppy but still funny. Johnny's just didn't have impact.

[A. Diction]

Both were pretty bad. JB's had a decent concept but a loose connection without any good tie ins. Wet dream/fire hydrant is a really really loose connection and the wording was all over the place.

Lenox just a statement with no wit or creativity put into whatsoever.



V. Boss town

[Letterman]

Didn't like either. Going with Lenox for the better attempt IMO.

v/Lenox

[ILLunatic]

12-4 in favor of Joe Boston