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@Killing Spree
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Killing Spree
100% points, 10 lines, 48 hours from checkin....
@Killing Spree
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Last edited by Massaker; January 19th, 2015 at 04:24 PM
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LLL Champ Match 2010: God 0f War vs King
FL Champ Match 2014: King vs Killing SpreeOriginally posted by God 0f War
fuckin poser shouldnt be here, uve never spit no ethered flames
you went from lyrisic to king, and havent lived up to either name
Originally posted by Killing Spree
This dudes a fake faggot with no future how I ether lames…
Went to KING from Lyrisic and we have yet to see you live up to either name!
Greatest of all time? Quit lyin bro, we know you’re just a fake poser
You never bag bitches, last time you came hard you was starin at a Drake poster
& sup with you pickin on the new breed? You that desperate to win though
Hit ‘em w/a swift kick, pull a Shawn Mike n toss this ugly bitch through the window
Everything that you spit, I’ll admit it’s wack n nothing but a complete lack luster
I saw your chick with Lenox, she said she’d do anything to get away from a fag fucker
So I gave her suga suga sweet lips, made her bleed off complete tip; I mean complete rip
I bashed your baby, smashed your lady; while she laughed cuz… “C2U Spree’s complete limp!”
Don’t get it twisted, you’re far from original. Flippin GoW’s bar was subliminal
Until the Thread Views quickly showed that this textual cannibal’s bite was criminal
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Originally Posted by ILLunatic
Originally Posted by Wordz AhGod.He's from Michigan if y'all didn't know.
See...
Dawg...U soft as fuck, & nothing in ya career u'v dropped is tough
So wen u say u mad butt fuck wit gaze?..its really not a shock to us
Cos U hot for Wordz, yet nothing U say is sick
Falling asleep while he feed the kids proves ur role is a wife in the relationship
My knife game leads to wins, u won't make it to wen I bust clips
I'll have illicit on the bench bleeding, U'd think I was a coach permitted to cut kids
Michigan says u pussy, & today U appear to be moist
They say U driiive jus to bring allot to the D, yet U steer clear Detroit
& I'm the future U can't kick it wit, beatin u downs nothin to me
U living up to the name ILL'so ass backwards, ya ankles hit ya dick runnin from me
Close casket!
Slackers
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ILL
drake was ok, your next bar was set up nicely for a personal but then you went away from it, bar 3 had a nice rhyme scheme I guess? but idk I think you could have came up w something better, i could have done without the next bar tbh, and your closer was dope conceptually
Kill
gaze was worded well and landed, Wordz was a decent personal attempt i guess, cut kids was alright, Detroit had potential but a miss for me, closer was.. interesting, it made me picture what you said but kinda filler IMO
Overall I liked more of Kill's verse. I've seen way doper on here, though. ILL just didn't have any haymakers, he could have taken this if he did
Spree gets my vote
Idk Ill...I really wasn't feeling your verse. It felt wordy and awkward as a whole. You had a great quote with the biting but failed to flip it well, IMO.
Spree I liked your opener and the WAG bar wasn't bad, but other than that I think the verse fell a little flat. Idk so much as if I wasn't feeling the concepts or flips, or both. With that said though, I have to edge this to Spree considering I enjoyed his opener and the 2nd bar was alright. I've seen much better from both of you though.
V/ Spree
Greatest of all time? Quit lyin bro, we know you’re just a fake poser
You never bag bitches, last time you came hard you was starin at a Drake poster
ehh. Not very creative, and the punch didn't hit hard for me
& sup with you pickin on the new breed? You that desperate to win though
Hit ‘em w/a swift kick, pull a Shawn Mike n toss this ugly bitch through the window
The opener paved the way for mad potential, but the punch just didn't do anything for me.
Everything that you spit, I’ll admit it’s wack n nothing but a complete lack luster
I saw your chick with Lenox, she said she’d do anything to get away from a fag fucker
fag fucker? lol cmon ILL, this is a miss for me
So I gave her suga suga sweet lips, made her bleed off complete tip; I mean complete rip
I bashed your baby, smashed your lady; while she laughed cuz… “C2U Spree’s complete limp!”
Not feelin this
Don’t get it twisted, you’re far from original. Flippin GoW’s bar was subliminal
Until the Thread Views quickly showed that this textual cannibal’s bite was criminal
didn't hit for me.
vs
Dawg...U soft as fuck, & nothing in ya career u'v dropped is tough
So wen u say u mad butt fuck wit gaze?..its really not a shock to us
not really feelin this.
Cos U hot for Wordz, yet nothing U say is sick
Falling asleep while he feed the kids proves ur role is a wife in the relationship
nah
My knife game leads to wins, u won't make it to wen I bust clips
I'll have illicit on the bench bleeding, U'd think I was a coach permitted to cut kids
illicit been done before, I've done it too, and this one wasn't worded right so it missed for me. shoulda been more like "illicit on the bench bleeding" without the I'll have, it coulda woreked better
Michigan says u pussy, & today U appear to be moist
They say U driiive jus to bring allot to the D, yet U steer clear Detroit
not felin it
& I'm the future U can't kick it wit, beatin u downs nothin to me
U living up to the name ILL'so ass backwards, ya ankles hit ya dick runnin from me
ehh not feelin this either
Damn I thought there was some potential hits in both ur verses, but u guys just didn't execute the shit to make it harsh. I think Spree had the better attempts here tho, so he's gonna get my vpote.
v/Spree
Spree wins
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***closed. ILL forfeits***
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