First post ever.. Just to get rid of that damn "I suck too much to post" crap.
Anyways, Its late and Im lit like a christmas tree so heres some fun stuff.
"off the top I cant stop cuz this aint written or wrote,
this a verbal freestyle stick in your spoke,
this shit take your breath away like a d*ck in your throat,
trigger finger get ya even if the digit is broke,
Im an uphill battle and its a slippery slope,
Im the Norse God loki-God of the trickiest flow,
in fact im spittin acid with the trippiest flow,
If my shit got any hotter than these blisters would glow,
but it dont stop there cuz a blimp I am higher than,
flow so cold got the game froze in cryogen,
show you how its done shit I could draw a diagram,
and burn it all down with what Im spittin through my diaprham.
But call me big poppa cuz my name is so notorious,
I shit you lil basterds cuz your flow is so inglorious,
what Im tryin to say I guess the moral of the story is,
Im the greatest ever and Ill always be victorious."
Late night freestyle/rant, enjoi..
Positive criticsm plzzzz
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