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Thread: True Hip-Hop

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    True Hip-Hop

    e sits at the back of the bus, invisible to the common eye/
    Blessed with a musical touch, but never gets recognised/
    His pencil is an ocean of emotion, the flow'll never stop/
    He's lost in his headphones... He's true hip hop/

    Imagine findin' a utopia that takes over your mindstate/
    He finds his perfect world contained within a mixtape/
    Head bobbin', pen scratchin', busy writing his scripture/
    No stoppin', sent packin', usin' a pen to paint a picture/
    Good vs. Evil, stories of the people, make-up a collage of ink/
    In the hip hop food chain, he's the missing link/


    Was a start. But i feel asleep last night. Any comments?

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    Back By Popular Demand... ELEETE's Avatar
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    YO DAWG I LIKE THE FLOW ALOT CAUSE THATS HOW I FEEL MOST O DA TIME YOU KNOW? BUT YEA DAWG KEEP THAT SHIT UP!

    I WOULD APPRECIATE SOME FEEDBACK

    -IVE LOST IT-
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=77243

    AT THE END OF MY ROPE
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    You've Earned a Custom Title! Manimal!'s Avatar
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    Short, yet to the point - i liked this piece, last line was easily its highlight as i read it, good imagery and story telling shown here, the mixtape line was worded dope, and thats coming from a guy who's been here three years so i know what im talking about! The flow was there, could you a slight tweak, more multi's and internals would help you a lot, but all in all a decent drop, you have a lot of potential my man, i hope you use that wisely. .

    Props!
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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    you kept it tense and raw from the gate to the other side of the fence twin illness peep my ish neva b famus
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    ^Thanks everyone.

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    I am The Law. I Messed up my other account.

    Uppin'.

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    Dope Wax
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    Off the heezey.

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    Pre Tense
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    Good imagery, I can see EMINEM at the back of the bus in 8 Mile thinkin those exact thoughts.
    I liked it.......


    PEACE~~~~~~~~~~~~>

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    Alias-C
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    Oh shit man... why'd you fall a sleep... you got to keep that shit going, make it longer... finish it man... obviously you know I'm feeling this... you was flowing there man... I was feeling that concept, vocab was there... damm... this shit was mad potential man, you got finish it dawg... lol...

    -1-

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    Dope Wax
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    ^I remember you from when I first joined.

    Thanks for all the replies.

    pz

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    StOrMiN lYrIcS
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    that was good your vocab was alright, but i liked ur concept

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    Dope Wax
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    ^Thanks for the in-depth reply.

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