thax all, any other....advice?
thax all, any other....advice?
""If you write for yourself or a loved one, you can never be wrong!!!!""
-The world makes me cold,the marines make me thoughtless-the difference between you and me is, thats just it...
I don't know where to start it was good but 6 lines?... It was way to short to do anything buddy which was a shame because I thought the first 2 lines could have opened up a massive piece, but hey it was different good 6 lines, good imagery and emotion, thanks for the read.
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thx bro
""If you write for yourself or a loved one, you can never be wrong!!!!""
-The world makes me cold,the marines make me thoughtless-the difference between you and me is, thats just it...
filler is for text battles not poems
Might as well just drop it, ya'll. Not really time, nor place for lectures. I'm fairly certain there are other forum areas for arguing about stuff like this somewhere else on the website. So let him have his piece.
Sorry champ, everyone has their own views on everything, especially here on RB. Keep writing.
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""If you write for yourself or a loved one, you can never be wrong!!!!""
-The world makes me cold,the marines make me thoughtless-the difference between you and me is, thats just it...
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