^ Its good it rhymes well, flows quite nicely... Not a bad all round piece to be honest dude can't wait to read the final draft.
Un corte en el interior
( A cut Inside )
Daggers Placed within grasp
My tight sweated palms slides the handle
Looking to the Cold Rigid Steel
Seeing Failures Face I weep
As a school girl faced with Rejection
My complex mind … Riddled with
Mysteries unable to solve my
Personal problems Slash After
Blood shed I bled slow
Looking Precise on Pain
I directly see no confirmation
My hart shatters cold beats
A sharp emblem-
The knowledge of relief.
Distgust slurred [picturess]
a brief a tesselate mind
and distained emotion
Denotes my strains
that rivets at the heart
and depicts the drips
that confines my soul.
I delve into the abyss
as I stroll into my slump
that sustains me to the wall
I have subjected my spine to-
and the flooding of the pupils
stricken my vision as i sit
contempt with my life.