teflon151 vs A.boody

[A.Boody]

12 lines
okay

[A.Boody]

you wanna start or me

[teflon151]

you can start,
lol

[teflon151]

ok i guess ill start then

[A.Boody]

I'm a bomb ticking down, ill explode when it stops
Rhymes will squirt out of me, your the pussy im the cock
You will absorb them in, it will come in a flock
Word by word until you suddenly pop
This is my first rap here on this site
Iv'e been battling alot I'm just here to take a bite
Scar my self in you, so you will remember me when your write
I'm in you now gotta rip your heart open with a knife
Invite all your hommies ill shoot them down with one rhyme
Or better yet i could shoot all of them down with one line
Now i don't wanna waste my time with this wannabe mc
Change my mind about you, write a rhyme which shows that your more like me

[A.Boody]

dude u ditched or wat?

[teflon151]

A. boody dont try to step to the don mecca,
Havent you heard, they call me the MC wrecka,
Even after you battle the best your still be a nobody,
And when I kill u and your crew you'll be left with no body,
You shoulda known betta, I bring all sorts of havoc,
I'm that iceberg that brought down the Titanic,
And just like and iceberg I'm bout my lettuce,
Watch your back at my salad bar I'm a little bit wreckless,
Trust me my dude you shouldnt agreed to fight me,
You a buster Douglas, I'm the Champ call me Ali,
Float like a butter fly, and I sting like a bee,
You just a pussy dog, why u barking up the wrong tree

[teflon151]

just like an* iceberg

[A.Boody]

niceee job

[teflon151]

thanks man good shit too.

VOTE UP!!!

[A.Boody]

vote up!!

[Real Dope.]

This battle was weak ass...sorry to lay it down to you..
but the only time you see a weak verse like that from me is when i know what im up against...but considering your verses were almost comparison i think you actually tried lol...
Starters both of you need to recognise a good punch when you think of a concept this all come's down to wording..
Come up with a dope concept...
Turn the concept to a punch...
Execute the punch with your wording...
But in this verse it was all full of statements, i mean don't get me wrong your structures were fine...it just knowone had any quotables soo it's hard to really come to the conclusion on who i vote for lmao....
but i think with the best "attempts" at a punch was probably teflon151 soo yeahh my vote will gooo to him...
needless to say guys both of ya'll need to elevate try checking out someone elses battles to become farmiliar with writing styles etc etc.
Vote: Teflon

[Quarter]

Both verses were played, worded terribly, and weak as shit. Teflon was less meh; he was a little molre original and his punches were more steady than a booty. Both you need to elevate and keep workin' at it.

v. Tef

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...852/index.html

[KnowP]

Both verses were played, worded terribly, and weak as shit. Teflon was less meh; he was a little molre original and his punches were more steady than a booty. Both you need to elevate and keep workin' at it.

v. Tef

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...852/index.html

this pretty much sums this one up for me too...
weak battle from both but Tef actually knows
what a battle should sound like

v/ Tef