Mr. DJ vs. Martyr

[Mr. DJ]

Quick 10 Lines
Just Check In

[The-Palestinian]

This My Check In.
An Hour time Limit Cool

[Mr. DJ]

Aiight Cool Give Me Some Time
I'll Be Right Back Though

But I Will Post
This Aint My Check..Keep A Look For My Check Cuz When U See That Then I'm Ready 2 Key Up A Quick 10 Aiight? Cool..

[The-Palestinian]

Mr.DJ Let me show you How I spin This Shit No Need For Turntables
Leave you Hanging From Cables Even then You Wouldnt Be Given A label
It Took You An Hour to set this up , Dont You Know That Time Is Money
But Every Second Your Drop In value Turning From A Solid Into something Runny
Chris Brown Look A Like but you Cant Pull That Off Not By Looks Or On the Mic
Even IF took Rhianna On A Mountain Hike Then Sat her Ass Down And Threw Down Strikes
Disc Jockey Aint A rapper Just Like Kobe Cant Play Hockey Acting Up Being Cocky
Ill Have Rocky Chasing you Throwing My Punches Leaving you Stocky
Your An Emcee That Should Get down on His Knees & Blow Niggas
Be on A cock Sucking Spree Eventually Change your Name to Marie

[Mr. DJ]

My Bad Dude
Had A Crazy Ass Weekend But I'm Checking In Now
So I'm Gonna Post Up In A Few Minutes Aiight

[Mr. DJ]

Hope U Dont Mind Man
Minutes Turned Into A Day, Had Some Shit Go Down The Other Day That I Had 2 Tend 2 So I'm Gonna Post In A Few

I'm Not Busy So Ima Post Up

[Mr. DJ]

I Feel BAD-FOR-THIS-LONER, He The Type 2 HARASS-FOR-A-BONER, Faggot..U Don't Have The Heart To Beat Me, U Must Be A BAD-ORGAN-DONOR

I Aint Gonna Switch My Style See U Jus CHOSE-THE- HITLIST, So Now Lets EXTOL-THE-PHYSICS, Yer Career Is Already Goin Downhill..So I'll Just THROW-YOU-WITH-IT

DAMMIT-YOUR-A-BLUFFER, Outta This World? U Outta Ya Mind Thinking U Can Put DAMAGE-ON-ANOTHER, U Can't Cuz Last Time We Saw The Greatness Of Mar's..The Damn PLANET-WAS-DISCOVERED

Yea I'll SAVAGE-YA-YUNG-LOVER, Sweet Talk Her, She'll Think DJ BIG-ON-THE-WISDOM..I'm Big In Many Areas, Treat Her Like Day Care The Way I Leave My KIDS-IN-HER-SYSTEM

MARS-COLD? Wait Him A Cold Stone Killer? Negative, His BARS-FROZE..So Lets See How U Function With That Out Yer ARSE-HOLE, U Aint Earn Stripes..Unless U Get Tatted With BARCODES



5 Equivalent
Got 2 Get Back On My Shit
pCe

[salacious]

dj winner for me

[Vallus]

mr dj took this easily

not big on ur stye but at least it's somewhat clean n polished compared
to everyone else usin that long bar ish....

good multi's, good concepts....decent punches
martyr didnt really have anything...decent structure minus the fact
a few bars where stretched, but really lacked in complexity
or any good concepts....

[A. Diction]

Mr DJ had the overall better verse. Like Vallus said, I hate that fucking style, stop using it! But, you did have some ok concepts, just need to work on your wording, set ups and execution. The first guy had absolutely nothing, he didn't even have anything that resembled a punchline. Easy vote.

Vote = Mr DJ

[~feed-back~]

lol @ dj's style... i used to use that a long time ago, man... it helps polish up the multies, no doubt. those multies help bring ya punches around even though a few were played but it still was enough to earn you a vote.

V/ dj

[Rapstyles]

Mr.DJ Let me show you How I spin This Shit No Need For Turntables
Leave you Hanging From Cables Even then You Wouldnt Be Given A label
-lol no
It Took You An Hour to set this up , Dont You Know That Time Is Money
But Every Second Your Drop In value Turning From A Solid Into something Runny
-wtf 
Chris Brown Look A Like but you Cant Pull That Off Not By Looks Or On the Mic
Even IF took Rhianna On A Mountain Hike Then Sat her Ass Down And Threw Down Strikes
-stretched as a muhfucka
Disc Jockey Aint A rapper Just Like Kobe Cant Play Hockey Acting Up Being Cocky
Ill Have Rocky Chasing you Throwing My Punches Leaving you Stocky
-bulllshiitt... Horrible bar
Your An Emcee That Should Get down on His Knees & Blow Niggas
Be on A cock Sucking Spree Eventually Change your Name to Marie
-lmao this doesn't even rhyme. Get DQ'd for this now please.
DeEjAy

I Feel BAD-FOR-THIS-LONER, He The Type 2 HARASS-FOR-A-BONER, Faggot..U Don't Have The Heart To Beat Me, U Must Be A BAD-ORGAN-DONOR 
-this won u it, nuff said already.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...85/index.html 

Drop an honest

[Rapstyles]

Lol 101 posts.. If this is still open when I get that I'll poll. But could u atleast rtf on that link I sent. Thanks

[KnowP]

Yea I'll SAVAGE-YA-YUNG-LOVER, Sweet Talk Her, She'll Think DJ BIG-ON-THE-WISDOM..I'm Big In Many Areas, Treat Her Like Day Care The Way I Leave My KIDS-IN-HER-SYSTEM

vs

none


Dj smashed this guy easily. better concepts, multis and punches turned haymakers compared to what Martyr brought.

v/ DJ

rtf: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...436/index.html

[Real Dope.]

Mr.DJ Let me show you How I spin This Shit No Need For Turntables
Leave you Hanging From Cables Even then You Wouldnt Be Given A label
Whack...
It Took You An Hour to set this up , Dont You Know That Time Is Money
But Every Second Your Drop In value Turning From A Solid Into something Runny
Noo...
Chris Brown Look A Like but you Cant Pull That Off Not By Looks Or On the Mic
Even IF took Rhianna On A Mountain Hike Then Sat her Ass Down And Threw Down Strikes
No Way...
Disc Jockey Aint A rapper Just Like Kobe Cant Play Hockey Acting Up Being Cocky
Ill Have Rocky Chasing you Throwing My Punches Leaving you Stocky
Not A Good Punch...Okay Multis Thats All...
Your An Emcee That Should Get down on His Knees & Blow Niggas
Be on A cock Sucking Spree Eventually Change your Name to Marie
No LOL!

Vs

I Feel BAD-FOR-THIS-LONER, He The Type 2 HARASS-FOR-A-BONER, Faggot..U Don't Have The Heart To Beat Me, U Must Be A BAD-ORGAN-DONOR
Okay....

I Aint Gonna Switch My Style See U Jus CHOSE-THE- HITLIST, So Now Lets EXTOL-THE-PHYSICS, Yer Career Is Already Goin Downhill..So I'll Just THROW-YOU-WITH-IT
Mehh At Best...

DAMMIT-YOUR-A-BLUFFER, Outta This World? U Outta Ya Mind Thinking U Can Put DAMAGE-ON-ANOTHER, U Can't Cuz Last Time We Saw The Greatness Of Mar's..The Damn PLANET-WAS-DISCOVERED
Nahh...

Yea I'll SAVAGE-YA-YUNG-LOVER, Sweet Talk Her, She'll Think DJ BIG-ON-THE-WISDOM..I'm Big In Many Areas, Treat Her Like Day Care The Way I Leave My KIDS-IN-HER-SYSTEM
No...!

MARS-COLD? Wait Him A Cold Stone Killer? Negative, His BARS-FROZE..So Lets See How U Function With That Out Yer ARSE-HOLE, U Aint Earn
Stripes..Unless U Get Tatted With BARCODES
No...

BREAKDOWN

I Think Marty You Need To Forget Simplicity And Start Putting In The Extra Effort To Your Bars, You Need To Use Metaphors And Use Personals Mixed That Way It Can Change A Whack Ass Bar Into A Dope Bar...
Dj I Don't Know But I Think You Knew What You Was Up Against...So I Think You Were Weak On Purpose, I've Seen Better Battles From You,
I Think Both Had Weak Verses But I Think Mr. Dj Took This One For A Easy Win...
Btw...Dj Don't HighLight/Bolden Your Multis IF Your Wording's Good Enough We Can See Them Bro...
Soo Yeahhh...
Vote: Mr. DJ