Boundaries Within

[Kontroverzy™]

My names kon an i'm not the man i used to be
I let the alcohol and industry, get to me
drowned in my ego, surrounded by people
I didn't know before, now i'm known and they knockin on thee-door
tell me what your suppost to do, when the demons gettin closer to you
I'm so in the mood to grab a gun and leave my brains blown in the room
Lord it's been a while since i've spoken to you, I hope u are true
before my praire was done, something arose from the blue

This is your angel speakin, I've been watchin for a while
ever since u was a child, I've been helpin you out
when you thought no one cared, man i cared for you
The devil wants you dead, but i'm here for you
no ones near loyal but your moms, she adores you
& theres nothin worse then watchin her only sons career spoil
Over some non sense, yeah it might be complex
now..... but trust me u dont wanna be gone yet
My times almost up i can't make decisions for you
but just decide which pathway is really for you

I blinked and look back at where the angel was speakin from
and he was gone, i got up and turned the speakers up..


a few months go by, everythings smooth
No blood on my shoes, no money overdue
But lately times is hard & i've been broke
plus i heard theres alotta money to make in coke
so i lose hope, now I'm Back against the ropes
theres a lump in my throat, why? i don't know
Maybe i am softening, but since the devils offering
Money, Fame & girls, god i don't wanna talk to him

Kon what has gotten into you, think about it
ya whole life is clouded, but not late to rerout it
god forgives all sins, but dude don't take advantage
cuz without him, success you wouldn't manage
my patients wearin thin, so you gotta look within
cause the way your headed you'll end up dead, or in the bin

you don't know shit bout me, plus your just an angel
so step back at once, and don't you test my anger


my life is fucked up, I'm really givin up what
I'm bout to pick the gun up and leave my fuckin gut struck
Lord i'm truely sorry that i wasn't what you wanted
I gotta go now, or else my life remains haunted
remember me, let me be the fire to ya energy
And to all my loved ones, uve been good friends to me
but its coming to an end so i gots to go
i couldn't fight the opsticles, now my life is optional (echo)

[Kontroverzy™]

links.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...html?p=6056869
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ch-352659.html

[Vincent Maestro]

This was tight...its like u collab'd witta angel...it had a suicide note vibe to it...also very cool...liked the overall rhyme pattern of it...liked how you got heated at ya gaurdian angel:
you don't know shit bout me, plus your just an angel
so step back at once, and don't you test my anger

10/10

[Broly]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ar-353203.html

This piece was, different, i've seen some try to execute what
you did in this piece, but failed, so far this one is the only
piece that i've seen executed somewhat perfectly, the emotion
was good no doubt, as was the imagery but i felt you lacked in
vocab, but some ok wordplay made up for it a little bit, but overall
nice piece, keep writing.

[Kontroverzy™]

yeah, your right about vocab. but this track is going to be in audio form soon so i didn't want to confuse the listeners so i kept it nice and simple. but thanks

[Kontroverzy™]

uppin.

[Broly]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ar-353203.html
Yo, RTF

[Kontroverzy™]

i got you man. just let me do something real quick.

[A-Tray]

nice piece, flow was pretty good... concept was nice,
your rhyme scheme suffered a bit as far as rhymes go,
but it somehow fit this piece... nice, good read
A.T.

[Kontroverzy™]

thanks my dude. i know what your saying.

[Witty]

Upping this. Thanks for following the rules.