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Thread: Quick freestyle

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    Quick freestyle

    Aight well I'm new to this site, and I'm kind of new to rapping, seeing as I've only been rapping for about a month and a half, and this is just a quick freestyle. Feed would be appreciated.

    Yo, mess wit me you get diminished I turn "men into mice"//
    I'm a dope MC with rhymes potent enough to put an "end to your life"//
    I'll lyrically murder any wack rapper, if you "pretend that you trife"//
    And I'll savagely abuse anyone til they "surrender the mic"//
    I'm a ruthless, "cannibalistic", predator who relies on "animal instinct"//
    My family thinks I'm sane, but I'm really "loco tho"//
    And if I hear you talking shit, I'll cut your "vocal chords"//
    I won't show sympathy towards anyone, so don't act "noble ho"//
    You gotta beware of Prophet, cuz I'm alway on the streets "lurking"//
    Looking for a bitch to eat like Big "Lurch did"//
    I'm also temperamental, when I popped out I was born "cursing"//
    You can't fool me, your not a gangsta just cuz you "tend-ta-cuss"//
    And you might have a gun, but we both know ya just "pretend-ta bust"//
    I'll go to a club, and I'll "get-crunk!"//
    And without any weapons I'll go out to the street and "test-punks"//
    They'll probably book it cuz they know I "stretch-chumps"
    Nigga's won't want to battle me either, cuz I spit so "In-fa-mous"//
    I could get satan himself to come and "sin-fa-us"//
    I spit of that dome, while your shit's pre written. fuck a pen n a pad, I write shit in my head like I was "Biggie and Hov"//
    Now I'm "boasting", cuz I hear people saying P is "so sick" And if you have a problem with that, come try to get "rid of me homes"//
    Cuz we all know who's gonna win, its embarrassing how u claim to be a G, yet your girls "giving me dome!"//

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    Re: Quick freestyle

    the quotation marks at the end of your lines aren't needed.. and for only rappin for a month this was alright.. keep writin and it'd be cool to see you elevate.. onezzz
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    Re: Quick freestyle

    Thanks for tha feed, and about the quotation marks, Idk I just made a habit out of that lol.

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    Re: Quick freestyle

    Closed. Read the rules.

    Pm me 2 links to OM's you've left decent feedback on and i'll reopen this.

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