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Thread: Week 7 -Licorice (1 - 3) Vs Elaborate (0 - 2)

  1. #31
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    Re: Week 7 -Licorice (1 - 3) Vs Elaborate (0 - 2)

    Entwined by ur speech, The way u refine a cause to preach
    Ur drop’s heartfelt, like love letter’s ,way it reminds of a bitch
    No rhyme
    Been bouncin around, like his position on his shin and chin is
    For clean diss, E takes It back old skul, so he’s punches can b in this
    Retarded
    wit the lines he have, cant blame peeps who rather be in rehab
    Fuk a spot light, …. Even popo having difficulties locating E-labs
    No
    To bang this guy, dont get ur hopes up, thats w/ no slang in line
    Ill cash in time, money don’t grow on trees, still E hangs on mine
    Self glory
    Im quick to chase fortunes, for chicks to freak on too
    E’s luck don’t stray…its gone, even a bitch wont stick on you
    Nope
    Ur a scam El, Dinning in clams is when u dropping damn shells
    And if ur main is a noob, think the rest should speak for themselves
    No


    vs.


    Making my day, wat are u a Fake or a gay?,
    plus rb’s 2 x better when we take u away,
    Nah
    im summin it up quick, the solutions ur shit,
    & this pussies so bent he’s reduced to a prick,
    Nope
    Disputing ya spit, for tryin to evr doubt ur iller,
    & We could make sandwiches with ur amount of filler,
    Not really
    Fuck personals, id only disclaim his career,
    No wonder licor’s not stable, hes Named after beer,
    I laughed, decent
    All ur rhymes are messed up, but ill positively hit ya,
    an re-an act jesus's death an cross u from the picture,
    Nope
    im writing with rage, with a lighting to gays,
    fuck stage fright, he's so shit he frightans the stage,
    Weak, but I laughed


    Vote: Elaborate
    He had 1-2 ok punches and Licorice didn't hit.
    Both were still pretty bad, but Elaborate won

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  2. #32
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    Re: Week 7 -Licorice (1 - 3) Vs Elaborate (0 - 2)

    nothing

    vs.

    im writing with rage, with a lighting to gays,
    fuck stage fright, he's so shit he frightans the stage,

    lmfao @ this battle

    vote - elaborate.

  3. #33
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    Re: Week 7 -Licorice (1 - 3) Vs Elaborate (0 - 2)

    v/licorice

  4. #34
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    Re: Week 7 -Licorice (1 - 3) Vs Elaborate (0 - 2)

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    Licorice
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    Entwined by ur speech, The way u refine a cause to preach
    Ur drop’s heartfelt, like love letter’s ,way it reminds of a bitch
    Didn't rhyme, plus it was weak...
    Been bouncin around, like his position on his shin and chin is
    For clean diss, E takes It back old skul, so he’s punches can b in this
    Misspelled a lot of words, which threw it off... And weak, again...
    wit the lines he have, cant blame peeps who rather be in rehab
    Fuk a spot light, …. Even popo having difficulties locating E-labs
    Just weak man... I wasn't feelin this at all
    To bang this guy, dont get ur hopes up, thats w/ no slang in line
    Ill cash in time, money don’t grow on trees, still E hangs on mine
    Could've been used better, so-so
    Im quick to chase fortunes, for chicks to freak on too
    E’s luck don’t stray…its gone, even a bitch wont stick on you
    A bitch? Once again, this could've been better...
    Ur a scam El, Dinning in clams is when u dropping damn shells
    And if ur main is a noob, think the rest should speak for themselves
    "Your main?" What? Ok... weak...

    Overall, this was a pretty poor verse. I have seen much better from you, in our battle, and others in Front Lines. It seemed like you were trying to hard to have multiple rhymes. All of your 'punches' didn't hit imho. I don't see a single quotable. Try to think longer about your bars and concepts and wording next time.


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    Elaborate
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    Making my day, wat are u a Fake or a gay?,
    plus rb’s 2 x better when we take u away,
    Concept was ok, wording was not.
    im summin it up quick, the solutions ur shit,
    & this pussies so bent he’s reduced to a prick,
    Nope, this was pretty weak, for real.
    Disputing ya spit, for tryin to evr doubt ur iller,
    & We could make sandwiches with ur amount of filler,
    Lol, this was funny, yet still weak.
    Fuck personals, id only disclaim his career,
    No wonder licor’s not stable, hes Named after beer,
    Hmmm... so-so.
    All ur rhymes are messed up, but ill positively hit ya,
    an re-an act jesus's death an cross u from the picture,
    You tried, but failed miserably. This didn't work...
    im writing with rage, with a lighting to gays,
    fuck stage fright, he's so shit he frightans the stage,
    Concept was ok, wording was not, again.

    Overall, this was a below average verse too. This seemed like a verse made for an audio battle. It ALSO seemed like you were just so busy with rhyming, and not wording your punches to be harsh. The only difference between these two bad verses is that some of Elaborate's lines made me laugh, while Licorice's whole verse was dissapointing. So...

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    VOTE: Elaborate
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    *Insert Sig Here*

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