Week 7 -Zelph (4 - 2) Vs Kid Sick (3 - 1)

[D.Silver]

LLL JR Rules

Check in - due Wednesday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
Verses - due Friday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
Voting - ends Sunday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
Min. 5 Voting links are required.

No voting links
If you win the battle=no win added to your tally.
If you lose the battle=2 loses

Offender(s) will be placed in the Penalty Box, with what penalties they've incurred, next to their name.

Gestures Rule
If in your battle you are not up by more then 2 votes when the battle is closed, the Deduction of votes for posting less then the min 5 links, will come into effect. Meaning if the votes deducted results in a lost for you, it will be Permanently Recorded.

Lines
Minimum 10 - Max 30
Match whoever drops first.

No Feeding, biting, recycling, bitching, or swaying

No Pics, unless agreed upon.

If you break any rules, you will be dealt with. Punishments will vary from each situation, so you could either get votes deducted from your battle or get booted from the League.

Good Luck to you both

[kid sick']

Check..

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...=1#post5507207
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...=1#post5510607
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...29#post5510629
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...78#post5513978
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...11#post5516211

[zelf]

check 18, or match whoever drops fist bub...

[kid sick']

My dad is in the hospital so keyed this up real quick....


I have heard a lot of battles in my life but really your shit is the worse
and YEA I said I wanted to kill myself.. but it was after I read YOUR verse
Telling me, " kid sick, I have to much dirt on you, you goin need some help"
right.. but you have dirt on you too.. Hell you even burried your zelph
I don't even try on this text shit.. I just key it up.. Have a lil fun see
you love god so much huh? well god dont like, but he made your ass UGLY
I don't walk with a crutch.. I bag bitches and such, they all be feeling my touch
say your still in sckool younging? <------ I see that it isn't teaching you much

life sucks man

BIKY....
Bring all the personals you got, talk about suicide COME ON take ur best shot
life sucks right? give it a chance son.. Your on RB more hours then not
Your worth a dime.. Beating me? come on zelph thats a big mountain to climb
how you write a verse?..
I know your not goin to show me your shit before you drop this time
Asking me is this punch good OR? what bout this, is this hardcore?
fucking newbs don't even do that, and your good? whats the cockyness for?
Stop it dick head.. kid sick bring war, we don't want to hear that shit no more
easy ima sweep this battle.. and use your white ass body to mop up the floor


Yea come with those "I wanted to kill myself personals"

[zelf]

I wont be dropping, give kid sick the win and sign me out for good.

Im leaving bye.

[kid sick']

Wow, so random.

[D.Silver]

Zelph implodes.

kid sick Wins (4 - 1)
Zelph Loses (4 -4) & Signed Out

Leaving this open for feedback

[Blanco.]

have heard a lot of battles in my life but really your shit is the worse
and YEA I said I wanted to kill myself.. but it was after I read YOUR verse
meh kinda played
Telling me, " kid sick, I have to much dirt on you, you goin need some help"
right.. but you have dirt on you too.. Hell you even burried your zelph
ok wordplay
I don't even try on this text shit.. I just key it up.. Have a lil fun see
you love god so much huh? well god dont like, but he made your ass UGLY
lol ok
I don't walk with a crutch.. I bag bitches and such, they all be feeling my touch
say your still in sckool younging? <------ I see that it isn't teaching you much
ok
Bring all the personals you got, talk about suicide COME ON take ur best shot
life sucks right? give it a chance son.. Your on RB more hours then not
ok
Your worth a dime.. Beating me? come on zelph thats a big mountain to climb
how you write a verse?..
I know your not goin to show me your shit before you drop this time
lmao
Asking me is this punch good OR? what bout this, is this hardcore?
fucking newbs don't even do that, and your good? whats the cockyness for?
ok
Stop it dick head.. kid sick bring war, we don't want to hear that shit no more
easy ima sweep this battle.. and use your white ass body to mop up the floor
lol ok


REAL TALK SONZ.. DOPE ASS VERSE ON THE REAL YO.. YOU SPITTIN' THAT FUCKIN' FIRE LIKE AFTER YOU EAT BARBAQUE CHIPS.

[kid sick']

After you eat chips there is a fire? I you wyte yo...


Thanks n shit..

[Icarus]

I have heard a lot of battles in my life but really your shit is the worse
and YEA I said I wanted to kill myself.. but it was after I read YOUR verse
aite
Telling me, " kid sick, I have to much dirt on you, you goin need some help"
right.. but you have dirt on you too.. Hell you even burried your zelph
decent
I don't even try on this text shit.. I just key it up.. Have a lil fun see
you love god so much huh? well god dont like, but he made your ass UGLY
nah
I don't walk with a crutch.. I bag bitches and such, they all be feeling my touch
say your still in sckool younging? <------ I see that it isn't teaching you much
nice flow and decent punch





Bring all the personals you got, talk about suicide COME ON take ur best shot
life sucks right? give it a chance son.. Your on RB more hours then not
LOL
Your worth a dime.. Beating me? come on zelph thats a big mountain to climb
how you write a verse?..
I know your not goin to show me your shit before you drop this time
ehhh
Asking me is this punch good OR? what bout this, is this hardcore?
fucking newbs don't even do that, and your good? whats the cockyness for?
nah
Stop it dick head.. kid sick bring war, we don't want to hear that shit no more
easy ima sweep this battle.. and use your white ass body to mop up the floor
eh

Alright verse...one or two punches stood out above the rest. They were decent actually, but the other stuff was not too great

[Taz™]

I have heard a lot of battles in my life but really your shit is the worse
and YEA I said I wanted to kill myself.. but it was after I read YOUR verse
^was cool

I don't walk with a crutch.. I bag bitches and such, they all be feeling my touch
say your still in sckool younging? <------ I see that it isn't teaching you much
^ nice-ish

Bring all the personals you got, talk about suicide COME ON take ur best shot
life sucks right? give it a chance son.. Your on RB more hours then not
^ nice

Stop it dick head.. kid sick bring war, we don't want to hear that shit no more
easy ima sweep this battle.. and use your white ass body to mop up the floor
^ Coop used a punch similar to this,

those were lines i was feeling the most from ur verse...
cool drop, and verse overall . i would say be a lil more consistent and it be dope.

[JDoe]

I have heard a lot of battles in my life but really your shit is the worse
and YEA I said I wanted to kill myself.. but it was after I read YOUR verse
ok
Telling me, " kid sick, I have to much dirt on you, you goin need some help"
right.. but you have dirt on you too.. Hell you even burried your zelph
ok
I don't even try on this text shit.. I just key it up.. Have a lil fun see
you love god so much huh? well god dont like, but he made your ass UGLY
no
I don't walk with a crutch.. I bag bitches and such, they all be feeling my touch
say your still in sckool younging? <------ I see that it isn't teaching you much
meh


Quote:
Originally Posted by Zelph
life sucks man




Bring all the personals you got, talk about suicide COME ON take ur best shot
life sucks right? give it a chance son.. Your on RB more hours then not
no
Your worth a dime.. Beating me? come on zelph thats a big mountain to climb
how you write a verse?..
I know your not goin to show me your shit before you drop this time
no
Asking me is this punch good OR? what bout this, is this hardcore?
fucking newbs don't even do that, and your good? whats the cockyness for?
no
Stop it dick head.. kid sick bring war, we don't want to hear that shit no more
easy ima sweep this battle.. and use your white ass body to mop up the floor
ok

...Kid Sick won by DQ but average drop.

[HighTimes]

v/ sick