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  1. January 31st, 2007, 12:07 PM #1
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    ***Disdain wit Society*** ft. Relli_Mak

    HyP0ThEtICle

    Society hates Hype...so Hype gone hate em back!!!
    want everyone to know...so Hype gone make a track!!!
    dont like what they doing...dont like what they done...
    when Hype axe how much he get...Society gone say none!!!
    cant believe how much my Disdain has grown to hate...
    maybe in time it will turn to love...Hype aint been known to wait!!!
    dont care if they hate back...cuz they can hate rap...
    I HATE ALL OF SOCIETY!!!!!yes you know they gone take that!!!
    my Disdain goes deeper and deeper...much farther than ya thought...
    they been looking for Hype to blame...seems a Martyr's what they sought!!!


    Relli_Mak

    Is it a conspiracy...or is it just they live to just hate on Relli
    They wanna be tough, but is more delicate than food at a Deli
    Never once have I disgraced my word or name..I'm real within
    No need 4 30 lines, I'll explain my Disdain w/ society with ten
    Hate it or love it, it only takes a mere 50 Cents for this Game
    Fuck an alias, I've taken the bad with the good under this name
    To my foes, I simply suggest we come 2 a truce 4 solid sake
    Or you'll become my primary target for every second I'm awake
    Nefarious Assassins is my crew, what I am, and is steady rising
    Trust me, this ain't a diss u verse...it's just Relli_Mak advising


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  2. January 31st, 2007, 12:33 PM #2
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    Re: ***Disdain wit Society***

    Dont Sleep On This People!!!!!!!!!!!

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  3. January 31st, 2007, 12:42 PM #3
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    Re: ***Disdain wit Society***

    Not bad, not bad at all..Pretty aight could have been revised to be better though na mean. Aight i'll break it down na mean

    Hypo- Your verse had a rap flow to it, that was good but it was also simplisitic na mean, it flowed good stunted at 1 or 2 points but picked up again. Content was usual ish though it suited the topic na mean.

    Relli- Same as H, your verse had good flow for most part but did have one or 2 odd word selections which kind of stunted the effect. Could have been broadened out mroe as well na mean. Though your refrences were a good addition.

    Overall- I reckon this colab is god in terms of flow and both parts relate to each other..though you have to tackle better topics with more substance or depth na mean...also broaden your vocab, not big words just some exclusive, less used words na mean.


    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=325249
  4. January 31st, 2007, 01:25 PM #4
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    Re: ***Disdain wit Society***

    loved it....I mean it had this touch of two retarded people stating what they think about society but it was drawn out like a picasso motherfucker
    very dope shit...keep the heat comin


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