Red Hooks vs ILLEGAL CONCEPT

[~Mansin~]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=318017
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=318142
^^ hit any link, both of you

I.C

hooks you get too exited about the gayest shit, u should be admitted
cuz u compare your concepts to dope,
....while I compare it to the black thing I just shitted
naw
but really try puttin them hooks to use, cuz thats the way to do it bish'
you catch the bait
.....so don't need a job u GREEDY bitch, u already selfish
ehh forced
dawg i dont wanna get started about ur apperance, ur will must be gone'
Jamaican hoe you are not a man....gay? idk but you'll never be demon'
lol just
^but naw im just playin, you get the ladies yea...u buy em' fur
so now the whole site knows u can pull a bitch
...but why don't you ever walk her
ehh
Red Hooks a dope emcee, naw wtf! who the hell woulda thought
he's fucking dumb DUH! we all know bumps on a log cannot be tought
ehh

red

Red'll hurt ya kid,& its real clear to see that you're bitch
Key had a BONE to pick with you ..& left you nuttin to chew with
???
text be hot fam ..get off my jock damn,or im deadin ya fate
kid reps 954 to the fullest ..cos thas his moms exact weight
lol
my punches penatrate as i swing enraged with hate
Jab,Hooks,Uppercut & 954 will turn into a 770 state
ehh
im Red Hooks slut,not no push over bitch your in way over ya head
the water was to deep so i ^u^ the mutherfuckin ledge
ehh ight
watch as i black his eye and crack his fuckin head
ppl hate to see stars born ...
when you're on ya back seein them above ya head
ight

vote red more quotables, cant say much more...

[~Mansin~]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=318017
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=318142
^^ hit any link, both of you

I.C

hooks you get too exited about the gayest shit, u should be admitted
cuz u compare your concepts to dope,
....while I compare it to the black thing I just shitted
naw
but really try puttin them hooks to use, cuz thats the way to do it bish'
you catch the bait
.....so don't need a job u GREEDY bitch, u already selfish
ehh forced
dawg i dont wanna get started about ur apperance, ur will must be gone'
Jamaican hoe you are not a man....gay? idk but you'll never be demon'
lol just
^but naw im just playin, you get the ladies yea...u buy em' fur
so now the whole site knows u can pull a bitch
...but why don't you ever walk her
ehh
Red Hooks a dope emcee, naw wtf! who the hell woulda thought
he's fucking dumb DUH! we all know bumps on a log cannot be tought
ehh

red

Red'll hurt ya kid,& its real clear to see that you're bitch
Key had a BONE to pick with you ..& left you nuttin to chew with
???
text be hot fam ..get off my jock damn,or im deadin ya fate
kid reps 954 to the fullest ..cos thas his moms exact weight
lol
my punches penatrate as i swing enraged with hate
Jab,Hooks,Uppercut & 954 will turn into a 770 state
ehh
im Red Hooks slut,not no push over bitch your in way over ya head
the water was to deep so i ^u^ the mutherfuckin ledge
ehh ight
watch as i black his eye and crack his fuckin head
ppl hate to see stars born ...
when you're on ya back seein them above ya head
ight

vote red more quotables, more creative , more consitant
only felt one of I.C lines the demon one, cant say much more...


V//red

[~Mansin~]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=318017
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=318142
^^ hit any link, both of you

I.C

hooks you get too exited about the gayest shit, u should be admitted
cuz u compare your concepts to dope,
....while I compare it to the black thing I just shitted
naw
but really try puttin them hooks to use, cuz thats the way to do it bish'
you catch the bait
.....so don't need a job u GREEDY bitch, u already selfish
ehh forced
dawg i dont wanna get started about ur apperance, ur will must be gone'
Jamaican hoe you are not a man....gay? idk but you'll never be demon'
lol just
^but naw im just playin, you get the ladies yea...u buy em' fur
so now the whole site knows u can pull a bitch
...but why don't you ever walk her
ehh
Red Hooks a dope emcee, naw wtf! who the hell woulda thought
he's fucking dumb DUH! we all know bumps on a log cannot be tought
ehh

red

Red'll hurt ya kid,& its real clear to see that you're bitch
Key had a BONE to pick with you ..& left you nuttin to chew with
???
text be hot fam ..get off my jock damn,or im deadin ya fate
kid reps 954 to the fullest ..cos thas his moms exact weight
lol
my punches penatrate as i swing enraged with hate
Jab,Hooks,Uppercut & 954 will turn into a 770 state
ehh
im Red Hooks slut,not no push over bitch your in way over ya head
the water was to deep so i ^u^ the mutherfuckin ledge
ehh ight
watch as i black his eye and crack his fuckin head
ppl hate to see stars born ...
when you're on ya back seein them above ya head
ight

vote red more quotables, more creative , more consitant
only felt one of I.C lines the demon one, cant say much more...


V//red

[Casper.]

hooks you get too exited about the gayest shit, u should be admitted
cuz u compare your concepts to dope,
....while I compare it to the black thing I just shitted
weak...
but really try puttin them hooks to use, cuz thats the way to do it bish'
you catch the bait
.....so don't need a job u GREEDY bitch, u already selfish
lol, nice wordplay
dawg i dont wanna get started about ur apperance, ur will must be gone'
Jamaican hoe you are not a man....gay? idk but you'll never be demon'
lol nice jamaican language use n the end haha
^but naw im just playin, you get the ladies yea...u buy em' fur
so now the whole site knows u can pull a bitch
...but why don't you ever walk her
Played n a way but still nice
Red Hooks a dope emcee, naw wtf! who the hell woulda thought
he's fucking dumb DUH! we all know bumps on a log cannot be tought
weak closure but it wor'x

954.

Overall nice drop with wordplays and punches, you can work on better closure's though

Vs.


Red'll hurt ya kid,& its real clear to see that you're bitch
Key had a BONE to pick with you ..& left you nuttin to chew with
No...
text be hot fam ..get off my jock damn,or im deadin ya fate
kid reps 954 to the fullest ..cos thas his moms exact weight
Lmao nice
my punches penatrate as i swing enraged with hate
Jab,Hooks,Uppercut & 954 will turn into a 770 state
Weak...
im Red Hooks slut,not no push over bitch your in way over ya head
the water was to deep so i ^u^ the mutherfuckin ledge
Weak agian
watch as i black his eye and crack his fuckin head
ppl hate to see stars born ...
when you're on ya back seein them above ya head
Head n Head!?...self explanitory

Overall a weak drop with like one ok line, u need to work on your elevation and def. your punches...no hate


Vote=IC, for dropping harder with better wordplay and punches, no hate decent battle... ~1~

[Cipha]

wow at these muthafuckin herbs voting i knew i should of made it a 500 post count

bump for some more experienced voters

[B_EAZY]

Damned good verse by Red. Thats all I have to say............................................... .................................................. .......................return the favor.

V//////////Red.

Vote DQed...wack...

-Smoka

[chuck taylor.]

hooks you get too exited about the gayest shit, u should be admitted
cuz u compare your concepts to dope,
....while I compare it to the black thing I just shitted
lol
but really try puttin them hooks to use, cuz thats the way to do it bish'
you catch the bait
.....so don't need a job u GREEDY bitch, u already selfish
lol at making up a word to rhyme it.. ok
dawg i dont wanna get started about ur apperance, ur will must be gone'
Jamaican hoe you are not a man....gay? idk but you'll never be demon'
nah
^but naw im just playin, you get the ladies yea...u buy em' fur
so now the whole site knows u can pull a bitch
...but why don't you ever walk her
eh
Red Hooks a dope emcee, naw wtf! who the hell woulda thought
he's fucking dumb DUH! we all know bumps on a log cannot be tought
lol

Red'll hurt ya kid,& its real clear to see that you're bitch
Key had a BONE to pick with you ..& left you nuttin to chew with
ok, wording could've been better
text be hot fam ..get off my jock damn,or im deadin ya fate
kid reps 954 to the fullest ..cos thas his moms exact weight
mom jokes = gay
my punches penatrate as i swing enraged with hate
Jab,Hooks,Uppercut & 954 will turn into a 770 state
lol
im Red Hooks slut,not no push over bitch your in way over ya head
the water was to deep so i ^u^ the mutherfuckin ledge
no
watch as i black his eye and crack his fuckin head
ppl hate to see stars born ...
when you're on ya back seein them above ya head
meh

pretty even battle here, both came pretty shitty... illegal had his opener and hooks had that 770 state bullshit, apart from that i didnt like anything else in this battle, but m giving it to hooks, for his opener was pretty decent aswell...

vote - hooks

[ILLEGAL CONCEPT]

wow @ u voting hooks even though u stated i had more quotables....eh fuckin gay

[Meks.]

hooks you get too exited about the gayest shit, u should be admitted
cuz u compare your concepts to dope,
....while I compare it to the black thing I just shitted
WACK
but really try puttin them hooks to use, cuz thats the way to do it bish'
you catch the bait
.....so don't need a job u GREEDY bitch, u already selfish
NO
dawg i dont wanna get started about ur apperance, ur will must be gone'
Jamaican hoe you are not a man....gay? idk but you'll never be demon'
no, weak
^but naw im just playin, you get the ladies yea...u buy em' fur
so now the whole site knows u can pull a bitch
...but why don't you ever walk her
no
Red Hooks a dope emcee, naw wtf! who the hell woulda thought
he's fucking dumb DUH! we all know bumps on a log cannot be tought
no

fuckin wack son.


red

Red'll hurt ya kid,& its real clear to see that you're bitch
Key had a BONE to pick with you ..& left you nuttin to chew with
eh, nah
text be hot fam ..get off my jock damn,or im deadin ya fate
kid reps 954 to the fullest ..cos thas his moms exact weight
no? wtf
my punches penatrate as i swing enraged with hate
Jab,Hooks,Uppercut & 954 will turn into a 770 state
nah
im Red Hooks slut,not no push over bitch your in way over ya head
the water was to deep so i ^u^ the mutherfuckin ledge
eh
watch as i black his eye and crack his fuckin head
ppl hate to see stars born ...
when you're on ya back seein them above ya head
only halfgood bar of the battle

vote red

[Red Hooks]

last bump

and you muthafuckas start explaining you're votes you're not to good to leave some proper feed

[kid sick.]

hooks you get too exited about the gayest shit, u should be admitted
cuz u compare your concepts to dope,
....while I compare it to the black thing I just shitted
na
but really try puttin them hooks to use, cuz thats the way to do it bish'
you catch the bait
.....so don't need a job u GREEDY bitch, u already selfish
meh
dawg i dont wanna get started about ur apperance, ur will must be gone'
Jamaican hoe you are not a man....gay? idk but you'll never be demon'
na
^but naw im just playin, you get the ladies yea...u buy em' fur
so now the whole site knows u can pull a bitch
...but why don't you ever walk her
meh, blah
Red Hooks a dope emcee, naw wtf! who the hell woulda thought
he's fucking dumb DUH! we all know bumps on a log cannot be tought
ok

vs



Red'll hurt ya kid,& its real clear to see that you're bitch
Key had a BONE to pick with you ..& left you nuttin to chew with
ok
text be hot fam ..get off my jock damn,or im deadin ya fate
kid reps 954 to the fullest ..cos thas his moms exact weight
meh
my punches penatrate as i swing enraged with hate
Jab,Hooks,Uppercut & 954 will turn into a 770 state
meh
im Red Hooks slut,not no push over bitch your in way over ya head
the water was to deep so i ^u^ the mutherfuckin ledge
ok lol
watch as i black his eye and crack his fuckin head
ppl hate to see stars born ...
when you're on ya back seein them above ya head
ok


v/Red Had a better verse in my eyes.. Um yea

[CrosT Over]

Overall This Was A Pretty Good Battle, I Think Illegal Definately Had The Edge At First Uttilizing His Flow, To Make The Punches A Little More Sharper, But Towards The End Of You Verse It Seemed As If You Might Have Been Rushed Because The Wordplay Was Just Decent, I Think Some Of Them Could Have Been Reworded To Pack More Punch.

Red- I Liked The Content Of Your Verse I Think As Far As Flow Goes You Barely Were Edged Out By Concept, But The Way You Worded The Lines To Form A Complete And Undeniable Punch Showed....

I Think Both Probably Could Have Came A Little Harder By Using Some More Personals, But Overall This Was Real Close, Hard To Choose, But For The Strength Of Punches By Red I'm Voting Him

V/ Red