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    AMaze

    Revised: AMaze
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    My thoughts are and will a-maze
    Of a hundred thousand corridors
    Creativity running rampant
    forming terrifying plots, mystical beings; my Minotaurs
    embodying hidden rebellious thoughts,
    Secret devious doors, five dimensional floors
    Word stairsteps cascading, flowing from my mouth to your
    ears.


    Hearken to these,
    Revolutionary ideas,
    Behold the blueprints,
    Not necessarily blue.
    Each colored royally; thought clothing fit for
    An Egyptian prince
    So that he may rise and war nations to Slavery
    Mind you, allthewhile, dressed quite godly


    Babylon the Great, The United States
    Theft and corruption, made right
    Prometheus’ stole fire and fled into the night
    Punishment with no end.
    His chains, our chains,
    Thought itself changed when


    Rebel’s stole U.S. [us] from them.


    A third of a man, 3 times the work; a single life
    A single soul.
    Step right up, good teeth, straight back
    To you he’s cheap,
    Food ain’t free, Sundays on the ships we feed em’ meat
    Step right up, can’t take em’ back
    To you, to you, to you she’s cheap
    Childbearing too, get another free.
    And minister-man’s in pulpit preaching
    Teaching,
    We ourselves are gods,
    Must be, cause what we say’s right, is right,
    Is right, so
    Step right up, to you he’s cheap
    Seller-man calls once, twice, thrice
    Pay a dollar to buy a soul for eternity;
    98 cents cheaper than Charon’s [or Chiron] price


    Crazed ideas.
    Bear-traps made for man,
    We got: cattle-wire and hound-dogs
    They’ll get stopped for they ran
    Us out of house and home,
    Watchmen and the Natn’l guard’ll shoot em’
    Niggers and Spicks
    Fore’ they get my home.
    My tax-money.
    My 56” Toshiba.


    Now.
    Imagine a world ruled by a German, Fascist, [some say Insane], Supremacist
    His door’s been marked with the hammer of Thor
    A Siamese L orchestral quartet
    Sweet lies, mixed with, piercing shriek and powder clap
    You’ll find that page 489 in Collier’s Dictionary.


    Go down hallway C-94
    Inside lies a partially bastardized Constitution,
    Edited to mention God in the First Amendment,
    Let thy mercy, Lord, be upon us, according as we hope in thee.
    13 rebel words accused of High Treason.


    Right down this here stretch is I-66
    Two lefts, and the 17th door on the right’s
    The Supreme Court
    But its walls are engraved with the 10 Commandments
    Hallway W’s one full of wars,
    Like a coal, black gold, vein gone dry.
    At the end of the hall should be a single door.
    Black as Cerberus’ eyes.
    I warn you fore you go in, it’s been another 4 billion years,
    And the Earth still ain’t recovered from radiation


    Now.
    You’ve read the entry mat.
    Sign the waiver, and enter.


    Watch out, the least sane ideas, always seem to find ways of becoming palpable.


    I’ve only lived a fortnight in the Revolution of our orb’s dishallowed soil.


    Even so,
    My thoughts are and will a maze.

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    I'm new.

    Wrote it mabye a month ago. Added and took out some awkward lines.

    Read it twice if it doesnt click the first time.

    Thanks.

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