the phantom what battle you looking at nigga
this goes to
LOP
betta flow the other dude heres some advice personal's and punches....or if not that at least thorw one metaphor
v/lop
check out my battles in my sig and vote please asap vs moneyonmymind
the phantom what battle you looking at nigga
this goes to
LOP
betta flow the other dude heres some advice personal's and punches....or if not that at least thorw one metaphor
v/lop
check out my battles in my sig and vote please asap vs moneyonmymind
Not Another... See Right, Writer, C.W Line
More Played then Ever..
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Vote Pens for better verse with punches, flow, structure, wordplay and plus the guy isnt banned. No hate other dude but i couldnt read your verse make the size bigger.
SMOKEY
It’s like you just came to land on a bomb, u had a doomed arrival,
I’ll turn spanish ‘n then own this bitch, just to call him El Deciple
vs.
you claim you the lord of all pens? but you can't even manage this deciple
fuck following ya footsteps, ya own kid don't wanna be shit like you
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Look you can quick key ya writtens,good riddens, ya not even a problem now
Im pissin on you like R Kelly, Im just helping you become an golden child
This battle was meh...all the punches were decent if that. a lot of played concepts, and even more fillers. You two need to work on getting your punches in order. Make them hit harder, and work more on your personals Deciple. LOP you need to work on punches, and concepts. You had a few good ones, so just build and make your punches stronger.
v/Deciple
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uppin
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Fucka Deciple, we can even it back in the day to Jesus’s time,
We could clone you 12 times, ya skill still wouldn’t match mine
vs.
nothing much really.
thats why my vote goes to lord of pens.. he took it with that line, plus it was a better overall verse, flow was better, punches hit harder, more consistant, etc. el deciple didnt really hit hard with anything in my opinion, you need to step it up with concepts and wording .
v.lord of pens
peace
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