ok then, thanks for the feedback
but Marv's not in the league this week (no match)
ok then, thanks for the feedback
but Marv's not in the league this week (no match)
I don't feel like doin' quotables, I'm just gonna explain what I thought of ya verses.
Vaskez - I just felt your verse was boring to be honest cuz I felt almost every concept you used I've seen before and the flips were nothing special. I really liked the bubble burst shit cuz it was fresh, n' run the league was really well executed though i seen a bunch of variations on that punch. The rest, splitting hairs, outstanding, name for himself, broke, second coming... that was all played n' thought you'd know better. The wrapping shit up concept was good, but the wording I felt was really corny n' took away from it. Get attention from ya girl was a nice personal, but I dunno, just felt like I seen stuff like it too many times.
Com - Your verse was pretty solid. The reviewing albums line was really weak n' so was the vaccines line, but the rest was pretty consistent. The UK line, elevation, n' vaskez votes lines were prolly my favorites, all pretty hard personals. Opener was really basic but got the point across. The lines by personal was really bland cuz its been used so many times, but I felt the personals were mostly hitting n' true.
Well, I got Com here. I think Vaskez definately tried to be more creative with the wordplay but wasn't creative enough n' Com just came rippin' with mean personals. I got Com here, don't worry Vaskez, it's not cuz you voted against me, lol, I just think he got this.
I got Com pretty easily here, n' its not cuz you voted against me Vaskez lol. I really liked Com's verse, I felt it was very consistent n' just a much meaner verse.
Vote - Com
7-8
Peeps'll nitpick n criticise ya verse, won't surprise ME there
N even I'll be splitting hairs...but then ya head won't survive either
lol ight
But damn, I heard ya son's walkin now n soon no doubt he will speak
He'll learn how to run....... <-|
...though his dad can't work that out for the league
cool
Must be proud of ya seed, shame ya can't finish battles, ya suck
Enjoy changin ya son's diapers...
...it's the only way you'll be wrappin shit up
cool but nah
I'm smackin this slut who still thinks he's dope n he's text's saviour
Man, the com bubble burst years ago with the internet business failures
decently good
But Com's privelaged on RB, rich in favours, I didn't invent this wealth
Only ^cat that can set his username to nothin...
...and still represent himself
can see where its heading, but nah
My fist'll dent ya health, ya won't son me <this projection is true
But I AM like ya son...I get more of ya girl's attention than you
hmm i like
I know I'm gamblin battlin you, ya think ya hard but I'm godly
I'm goin for broke, n won't forget a SINGLE part of ya body
hehz
We're both textcees n ain't shoddy, n I'm makin harder noise, jerk
But Com's outstanding in his field...where ALL british farmer boys work
lol
Before me, ya crew was the worst, you're an easy pussy to scare
Then you INVITED me to Second...
...but I'm less courteous n just puttin you there
okay
You can have the win if you want man, I can be the storm that you weathered
And all I want is a favor... just don't ever record again... ever..
coulda been harder
Our crew is reknowned for innovation and keeping whelps in their station
So I've added vaskez to the roster to show we'll also help with elevation
nice
And its amazing how the time flys, you've been dope and now your mind's dry
But bitch thats what happens when you don't have me to run your lines by
lol
Prick its time to get payed, you're always giving advice and acting serious
You kinda remind me of Bounce but without the brains, tact and experience
heh
English rep grows with every new day, can't let it be wrecked by a few gays
So between me and you vaskez, I'd rather you stopped repping the U.K.
meh
Prick I'd never wanna be you, you know it all? bitch you're see through
This dick is reviewing albums when its his verses he needs to
decent
And will this battle be close? will they vote and laugh at my quotes?
At least one thing I don't have to worry about is one of Vaskez's votes
lol
And now this depressing little crack fiend can finally try for the track team
Because winning got contagious and I just jacked him full of vaccine
hehe
You're a fucking internet fag, this bitch won't lose his temper soon
Because Vaskez only gets boisterous to lure them back to his room
lmao
close as it gets pretty much, but i got com buy a hair for this bar
Our crew is reknowned for innovation and keeping whelps in their station
So I've added vaskez to the roster to show we'll also help with elevation
vote - com
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