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    ~Wizdumb~ ..

    yo

    I take aim thru scripture.. paintin sinister pictures in one's mind
    Sun blind, blistering shine.. rhyme mixture designed
    My light fixtures a moon's crecsent..studyin truth's lessons
    till i die, and rise to the true essence
    Purified by pain, I revised my gains, staked my claims
    But was never forced to sign my name
    We're all one and the same race... far as minds can tell
    All flesh bear the same taste.. to the fires of Hell
    Vicious inflictions.. religious victems of tabernackles
    Since Adam's apple.. we've all been stricken to shackles
    With evil spirits to grapple.. livin thru battles
    Evadin' the snake pit... caged in the slave ship
    Abolish makeshift knowledge of fake wit
    Layin dormant like a cancerous mass
    Until the day it rise like Lazerous past
    Why pray to God? He'll never answer us back
    Till Holy rapture attacks.. then maybe after the blast
    The answers lay wit the bodies.. trapped in ash

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    sic shit man, bravo.........
    good rhyme scheme, tight flow.
    i like the piece because it has a historical/ biblical resonance which i feel reflects the natural battle of Yin and Yang, Hard and Soft, ect. well done.

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    thx for the comments man... always appreciated

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    anyone else?

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    it was real good i was feelin the flow (it was eazy to read)
    overall i sat 8/10 good job homie

    read my shit and tell what you think itz called What Now (feedBack PLEASE)

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    thx bro.. i peeped your shit and it was tight fo sho... peace

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