i liked how ya were basically sayin love is a drug. i thought tha structure and multies were tight too...definately cought my attention.
i liked how ya were basically sayin love is a drug. i thought tha structure and multies were tight too...definately cought my attention.
Wow, nice. I'd reccomend this for legends but you got a Chingy avy. I really don't see how you wrote that. Surprised me. Nice.
Man this drew me in from line one. You executed this brilliantly. The rhyming was insane!! It flowed quite well but sketchy in some points. That was your only flaw. Your emotion and approach was awesome. Your imagery was so in depth and perfect. I dont see it being any better. And thats serious. Awesome drop!
It's time to do the thing - that's word to ya wristwatch
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yo this peice was hot it had pretty good vocabs and a good flow
Man I like the form and the way you put your piece out there. It was very smooth and I liked the flow.. I grasp the concept of what you were trying to talk about immediately.. from now on when I want some deep shit I'll check out ya shit.. keep writin
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