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    Ghetto Mind

    ok heres something i just came up with rate it 1-10 and feel free to leave comments thanks niggaz


    The mind of a nigga that lives in the ghetto is very sedimentary/
    Wondering how long it will be until they go back to their second home the penitentary/
    Not beliveing in themselves because they cant/
    Shot down by the goverment for a chance/
    The mind of a ghetto nigga is deep and full of depth/
    The memories of violence and torture are the only things that are kept/
    Zero percent of their mind is filled with love/
    One hundred percent of their mind is wondering when they'll go above/
    Or will they go down to the firey pit/
    Or could they have their mind be internally lit/
    With wisom and power to be with all others/
    To have love for everyone not just the brothers/
    Internally sharing and externally too/
    But, it's too hard to do that I am sure you already knew/
    Anyone reading this is troubled in some way/
    Wondering will they survive till' their next birthday?/
    Or be dropped dead, like so many more/
    Can someone just explode the Ghettos hard core?/
    The insides of a gangster are one of a kind/
    Tortured sad and angry is a Ghetto Mind/

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    uhmmm kinda basic...best thing was that u stayed on topic an was deep in ya subject.. coulda used more mutlis an better structure
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    Closed. For dropping the same links on pieces you've replied to as you did in 3 other drops.

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