Definition of a G

[James,]

hey this is just something I put together just give it an overall rating 1-10 or leave some comments thanks niggas

Really what goes through a G's mind when he lays down at night/
Will tommorow be a better day or the same survival fight?/
Will something change if a G trys to do better/
Maybe he could apply to college send an application letter/
But what would he put down ive been roaming the streets for 5 years?/
Universitys really dont care if you have no fears/
Born and raised in the ghetto can someone really get out?/
Or can all you do is sit around and pout?/
Can a nigga get outta this place with no harm done to himself?/
Can you pickup those books and put your 9 on your closet shelf?/
I mean gangsters act tough but they really wanna succeed/
They'd rather have a family then be puffin on that weed/
Put does societies ways hold them back?/
I think its the worlds fault that G's attack/
I wish all my ghetto brothers could just pick up and leave/
But them goin into the real world all they'd do is get decieved/
And that is what would turn them back to there old ways/
I mean fuck crimestoppers slogan crime DOES pay/
So just sit down and look up the definition of a G/
Its simply just two little letters M-E/

[DATBOIP]

9.9
i thought that shit was da bomb.
the real def of a g. fa sho.
but watch out, alot of folks gon tell you to "Elevate"
and critisize your shit, dissect it in every way possible.
fuck em... lol
keep the OM's commin.

also plz comment on my open mics. (in my sig)
preciate it in advanced.

[Whyte Out]

keep flowin

vote for dis shit

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=237918

[EvOLuTioN]

That was good...i gonna tell u to elevate don worry bout it, I liked the imagery and it had me wanting to read it...which is rare, it was a good topic to rhyme on and ure words met the title...good flow, structure culda been better overall 7.9/10

if you think thatsa low rating its only cuz ive seen some really hott shit taht actually got 10/10 u shuld read some of the vets shit around here

[JayKay]

You stayed on topic, which is only a good thing. But there was some lines that were a little longer than others by quite a bit, and unless you spit it right, might need work. Also there was a lack of multi's, multi's are the cheese to your macaroni, give that verse some flavor. But for real, I'd say about a 7.5 or 8.0. Keep it up

[EvOLuTioN]

Lol Jaykay nice analagy ima use that 1 day

[WordPloy]

But what would he put down ive been roaming the streets for 5 years?/


haha for real G

rhymes is on point and vocab is decent enuff

yeah am feeling it coz its str8 real ish

just maybe even up the format and the flow next time


stay poppin blud
pz

[Johnny 6-feet]

You need to post 2 links to 2 pieces you've left decent feedback on or this will be closed. Thanks.

[SouthSide G]

9/10
Very nice man, that was some hot shit.
I was also thinkin you should elevate but nevermind,
you brought it man.
If thats somethin you just put together for the fun of it, I would love to see some freestylin

pce brotha

[James,]

hey yall thanks for the comments,

links:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...32#post3268632
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=239116

[Johnny 6-feet]

Closed, did you honestly think i wouldn't notice that you posted the same links in two of your threads?

You put those 2 in glock cocked.