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Thread: refugee (sorta like a poem)

  1. #1
    Narcicyst
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    refugee (sorta like a poem)

    personal strife
    snake to my mindstate rehersal for life
    fate's my blind datetoo late not to be alone in this long fight
    an enclosed jin within my own skin
    with hold the truth fortold to win
    to selfish to help this hellish cause
    i'm willing to kill with my own paws
    an animal... words handled by mandibles
    from the creed of man to stand
    on these few strands of land
    began plans of ways to banish you
    can't understand your language tools or politics
    cribs rearranged to apartments from plains of sand dunes
    my people stand too straight not to have you
    present like gifts
    the common mic shifts
    live the plights sent on rivers
    plus my plans are bigger
    don't label me a teerorist or sand nigger
    i'm more than a flick of fear
    hold you beer and liquor
    i wanna quit livin here...the sickest sinner
    apraise my own race in zealuos
    crooked bloodline like sickle cell
    my inner...i live in hell
    veteran beduans compete for the title that's built on deceit
    refuse to feed starving children they concieve
    no hopes for peace
    while the truest walk with no hood and bare feet
    my people throw hooks like choruses for they own nooses
    soldiers choose us as they source of endless spendin
    the outcome of sentences are still pendin
    bretheren suicidals is a defensive preference
    trends of descendants is that we should seek self and repentance....

  2. #2
    MOLOTV
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    onca agin,wordplay waz on point most of da way,n it flowed pretty smooth give or take a few lines,4 bein sorta like a poem it makes a good flow if eva intended 4 dat,stay up,1

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