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    When

    When life looks gleam
    and nothing is what it seems
    and everyone around you stares
    with burning eyes and dirty glares

    When all your inspirstion
    as with your determination
    has droped to nothing
    then lifes become gleam

    Every day i await death
    with every blink and every breath
    hoping this will be the last
    i cant seem to think of anything but the past

    Reminded of the times ive tried, and failed
    my fate so terribly unvailed
    Nothing more than who you are
    Never reach for dreams too far.

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    You've Earned a Custom Title! The Vortex's Avatar
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    coo poem 2nd stanza needs the rhyme scheme fixing..

    i can relate
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    thanks for the looks, i think its just cause i mispelled insperation about the second stanza

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