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Thread: The Metamorphosis of a Rose - SpokenO and K.

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    can I kick it?

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    Pretty good read here. Both of you guys played everything well. The flow was pretty much flawless, It didn't send me off in the wrong direction one bit. The wordplay and vocab was probably the strong point in here, which is really good. Everything else, I'm sure everyone said it already. Nice Drop. peace.

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    Good stuff. I read this already a while ago, but didn't comment. I liked Spoken's abstractyness, for want of a better word. Good rhyming, and K's part bridged the piece nicely. Your writing gelled quite well actually, although, as said already, they were very different styles. Very good read, both of you.
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    thanks jek

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    last up yo.

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