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    .:: Lost Ghost/ Red Requiem ::.

    I walk through the wet, the rain plastering hair to my skull,
    as I shed memories to sweep away this dark day's dull.
    Memories as I played games, observing the grinning face of my little boy,
    Shadows sweeping happiness away, dark hands shredding joy.

    I walk through the wet, though I still remain dry,
    as I think to a sunnier place, and say my goodbyes
    to the people I once loved, as now I walk as a ghost,
    devoid of the moments that I still miss the most.

    I walk through the wet, yet dry in my hand is a picture frame.
    As my families souls were reaped, as death lays his dark claim.
    I remember the arson's devils work and the life-taking fire,
    sending flying souls above to add to His Heavenly choir.

    I walk through the wet, reminiscencing momentous moments,
    like Kodak commercial pictures, with saddening components.
    All of it's forever gone, and by the hands of a single man,
    of the simplistic souls that can still sweep joy from this desolate land.

    I walk through the wet, mostly dry like I'm crossing through time warps,
    as my eyes recall these happy days through the lifeless eyes of a moving corpse.
    The burnt-out remains of a house awaits me down the quiet road,
    beckoning me to the ash, packed with old memories that my mind also knows.

    I walk through the wet, thoughts flitting through my crowded mind,
    of smiling children playing and my wife's lovely grin, painfully kind.
    I may be six feet under, but I still walk on two feet in this sad place,
    where I'm bound to the restless results where my life was lived, along with that laughing face.


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    Her eyes glazed to the ways earth portrays it's occupants...
    The days spent in evaporating blood causing a haze, frozen in the shock of it.

    She remained still, seeking to fulfill the will of her dying parents screams.
    Memories singed with shrill shrieks as blood spilled crimson upon sheets...
    Soft-spoken prayers issued as tears begun as a stop came to heart beats...

    To descend stairs as fear sieged her with poison-tipped spears under the sun...
    To run away as guns continuously blazed, the tightly tied lace of life undone.

    Motionless on an armchair in despair, waiting for her heart to repair under tragedy.
    Every moment a game of sacred solitaire to declare strange stragedy...

    She waited until satiated to raise, enemies hated, revenge sworn.
    Sedated with the rage she created, wondering if her sanity was reinstated as she no longer mourned.
    Last edited by Kein Witz; January 18th, 2005 at 05:26 PM Reason: Adding new drop.

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    You've Earned a Custom Title! LivenLegend's Avatar
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    dis was coo, it was mostly like a poetic type shit, u put alotta thought into it ya linez kept me in it, it could improve more lyrically tho, wit Wordplay Multiz punchez n shit, keep droppin

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    It really was a poem...so why would someone add wordplay to it? Just wanted more people to see it. :\ Anyways, it was a quick keystyle, like I said. I'm working on my novel.

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    lets get it poppin

    hey look lets get it right/2serious'll bet his life
    that if i cant do it then u cant do it/
    and if i make music then u jam to it/
    I been writin songs for too long i'm here to stay/
    and if anyone got somthin the say/
    then u see da ak, u gon here it spray/
    u be on the floor i be like yea sit there and lay/
    have ya moms callin my number trying to question me/
    like how did i get to you/ see dee's bullets ya moms can get som too/ then i fly away unidentified like them rides that the jetsons use..YEAH YA BOY 2SERIOUS HOLLA ME..I'M WAY TOO COCKY MAN HOLLA AT ME!!!
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    Yeah...make your own damn thread and don't clog decent works with shit.

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    where u from dog?...bist du deutscher?
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    Ohio. I'm not German, but Ich mag Schokolade.

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    deine mutter BeRLin`S BesT's Avatar
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    well I see...guess u have German in school then...lol....sorry for mistakin....but what't the name about?
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    :\ Dunno. German's a cool language, and the name sounds cool.

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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

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    This dumbass F-roqs got like a million sigs....so annoying

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