sexuall encounter

[DALC]

The anal cavity lacerated by imprinted fibers of insanity,
upon the malfunctioned processes of a goddless savior.

A colon incubating a fetus;conception of horrific nature...
And perhaps operating by the energy of sodomized thought..

Intestines plummiting from a bovine naval,
A face dripping organic material and the deffication of reality..

Vaginal secretions intoxicating with an aroma of sexual bloodlust,
Your cognitive process;the subject of which to be sodomized,

wedding vows strung above the rotting corpse of necrophilac desire,
perspire suicidal thought of which to use a sexuall arousal.

Mastrabate deep upon the canvas,
Artwork painted by the portrayal of insurmountable inevitability.

poison my wine,pain my stimuation..
literature slave to my sexuall lust,writing my means of reproduction.

[DALC]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...23#post1940723

[XNottyxBabeX]

this was a bit disturbing ... but that aside i guess all i can say is good (im a lil too disturbed to say much more at this time) ..yeah ..good...

[DALC]

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[Britt]

Hmm, so interesting in a very gothic way. Your piece was off the scale when it came to sexually and I liked how you took such a delicate interaction and made it quite sick and horrid. The piece was strange and usual but It gave off the vibe of really nasty which only showed your excellence in imagery. Nice way of words, and I think this topic symbolisized a lot more then what noticed on the first read. Overall nice job exposing the Eerie side of something nice.
(8/10)

[DALC]

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[Varentao]

In a quite vivid way (unfortunate to those not schooled in the arts of human extremeties) you took on something that usually throws up total random, teenage angst like crud. And made it into something quite forumalitive yet still poetic. It flowed with horror (though not over done) and graphic intensity. But didn't 'fly away'.