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    what`s the difference?

    weak-minded perspectives susceptive to infectious genocidal reflexes when the powers of persuasion & charisma connected
    energetic words projected,
    subliminal sensations excite nerves` kinetics
    target market, dejected pathetics who`ll do anything to be respected
    under the influence of confusion and meticulously constructed illusions
    who really controls the movement?
    who cares?...most abused it
    the population`s been overtaken with fixations of self-induced desperation
    displacin intellect & self-respect wit a lack hesitation for takin dictation, when honor met it`s replacement
    in most cases, a subconscious common sense would normally negate this
    but blind faith is what motivates this man who`s faceless to disgrace his greatness
    dignity, each entity coincidentally misplaced it
    creation of revolutions for the sole purpose of amusement
    their passion, bloodshed fuels it
    so they receive what they`re askin for
    action...more and more
    until hell`s angels attack god`s front door
    what have they come here for?
    individually constructed justice
    that concept doesn`t exist
    but they don`t know this, so of course these idiots persist
    while the wanna be righteous wage wars with words
    afraid to act, instead they ask, to be given what they deserve
    so they`re rightfully served
    given the vision of birds to observe the apocalypse
    collision of polar opposites
    the words that crossed the prophet`s lips predicted this in 1666
    a millennium after the first attempts to convert earth`s inhabitants to devil`s advocates
    now we act as walkin catalysts, afraid to battle this unnatural bliss
    rendered defenseless by mental ignorance that`s left our appendages riddled with impotence....

    the tale of the mindless simpletons & the frightened citizens...they take different paths to the aftermath, but in the end, what`s the difference???
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    i replied to ..

    camrok - enter the light

    tha return - untitled

    now, let`s get some feedback.
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    Shit dude, wordplay is persistantly just bouncin' off the screen, multi's with effective syllable use...dope concept...i felt the finishing lines just wrapped it up and tie the fuckin bow real pretty...shits hot

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    very complex and sublinal i thought it was hot keep it up good piece 1

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    more feed back would be nice please
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    yeah i agree with them... loved this

    a millennium after the first attempts to convert earth`s inhabitants to devil`s advocates
    now we act as walkin catalysts, afraid to battle this unnatural bliss

    nice internals n str8 vocab

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    had some good vocab wordplay was tight
    overall this was a complex piece
    this also had a good concept overall this was a pretty good drop

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    uppin this
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    wow.. i'm quite impressed..
    multi and syllable use was outstanding,
    internal rhyme was nice....
    nice overall message, and some nice vocab
    to make the piece a lot more complex.
    really nothing else to say... some dope stuff..

    prob my fav lines...

    "but they don`t know this, so of course these idiots persist
    while the wanna be righteous wage wars with words
    afraid to act, instead they ask, to be given what they deserve
    so they`re rightfully served
    given the vision of birds to observe the apocalypse
    collision of polar opposites"
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    damn yo shit is hot...the words u used and how u put them together...I am real impressed shit was off da chain. 1

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    good looks on the feedback
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