you guys know the rules.
you guys know the rules.
Damn, I just battled you man. 20 Lines.
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Last edited by Blood Drenched Tampon; July 31st, 2004 at 01:09 AM
Damn, it's true. And i said 16 lines. And you said 'it's only four less man.' ...
16 lines. : )
good luck Quill.
20. I posted first. Follow MY rules. I'll edit this with my verse.
Wassup Met, we meet again, & I'm digging your style
Let's talk, lay your head down, so I can kick it awhile..
I'm rippin' this child & displayin' whats tough in this verse
Smacked with my Notepad & say you're touched by my words
Loving the hurt, this chick Quill rarely has flaws
Say Met could be consistent, & I say hail Nah....
Leave you frail dawg, punk, your rhymes a gimmick..
Cuz we all know Meters stop's when theres a time limit
Lines finished, and Meters can't depart from defeat..
& I'm winning by a long run..since you are what you eat
I pardon the weak, in this league u might get by though
Cuz Metres wasn't known or considered..until that typo
Why post? Beats me, you'll still at the beginning of rap
& I can take M on or off, like a University of Michigan cap
I'm ending this wack..kids weird aint from around here
Ain't step up his game to see me, so I give him downstairs
Round for round you can't bare me, you're just a fake
Kid can't be a hotsauce, if he ain't raise the steaks..
Just take this rape, like bad fish, this bait's foul
So FUCK Em..........I'd rather say I 8 Mile...
Hate Me Now.
If you can't catch my wordplay. "Meh"-Savir.
Doubting my hospital-ity? Fuck it, I’ll reassure this geek
And show her I intensive’ly care while she convulses for a week
Because Qull far below peak, bitch a complete no-talent tramp
So I’ll leave more IV on this bitch than retarded kids at camp
I decide lines son…that’s how it stands slut, I’m the winner
Because I make demands…
…and you only make da man’s dinner
But Quill’s just a beginner, a one-trick horse left in a hearse
‘Cuz take the nameplays out, she has a below line limit verse
Before canin’ first I laugh, she’s the worst and it’s clear
But she commands respect…
…yeah, in a budding e-romance with Savir
Fear me stupid slut, and you’re such an untalented MC, yo
So I assault you with my pump…cuz bitch, you fuel my ego
But i’m impressed though…I couldn’t have made it sooner
But more‘cuz she manages to have an 0-1 record in LLL jr.
She just rose through the grapevines…Quill ain’t vet, ya see
‘cuz it ain’t that she got no vice...
…she straight has novice tendencies
I’m forgettin’ she existed but she made me dumber by far
‘cuz I read your verse…
…now my intellect’s complaining ‘bout working too hard
Left this bitch in shards…yeah, I already KO’d her then
And fuck half-assing…
...i’m too lazy to drop to your level again
Last edited by Meters.; July 30th, 2004 at 06:29 AM
Originally Posted by Quill
Well Quill basically stuck to the wit/wordplay stuff, while metres mixed it in with some personals and the such... but i thought they fell a bit flat. each had two punches i really liked, but quill just had a more consistent rest of verse, though it did get a bit monotonous.
v/ quill, by a hair
Last Word
I must last... word
Wassup Met, we meet again, & I'm digging your style
Let's talk, lay your head down, so I can kick it awhile..
---almost
I'm rippin' this child & displayin' whats tough in this verse
Smacked with my Notepad & say you're touched by my words
---meh, not really
Loving the hurt, this chick Quill rarely has flaws
Say Met could be consistent, & I say hail Nah....
---i get it, but are u trying to lose the readers?..good personal
Leave you frail dawg, punk, your rhymes a gimmick..
Cuz we all know Meters stop's when theres a time limit
---nah...not feeling
Lines finished, and Meters can't depart from defeat..
& I'm winning by a long run..since you are what you eat
---ok, decent flip
I pardon the weak, in this league u might get by though
Cuz Metres wasn't known or considered..until that typo
---ok
Why post? Beats me, you'll still at the beginning of rap
& I can take M on or off, like a University of Michigan cap
---meh
I'm ending this wack..kids weird aint from around here
Ain't step up his game to see me, so I give him downstairs
---pretty coo
Round for round you can't bare me, you're just a fake
Kid can't be a hotsauce, if he ain't raise the steaks..
---wack
Just take this rape, like bad fish, this bait's foul
So FUCK Em..........I'd rather say I 8 Mile...
---lol, and his name is Miles...
Doubting my hospital-ity? Fuck it, I’ll reassure this geek
And show her I intensive’ly care while she convulses for a week
---trying too hard
Because Qull far below peak, bitch a complete no-talent tramp
So I’ll leave more IV on this bitch than retarded kids at camp
---lol, chuckled
I decide lines son…that’s how it stands slut, I’m the winner
Because I make demands…
…and you only make da man’s dinner
---lmfao, jokes like this get me..
But Quill’s just a beginner, a one-trick horse left in a hearse
‘Cuz take the nameplays out, she has a below line limit verse
---ooh..nice
Before canin’ first I laugh, she’s the worst and it’s clear
But she commands respect…
…yeah, in a budding e-romance with Savir
---points for my name, but kinda ehh..cuz i e-love juicy
Fear me stupid slut, and you’re such an untalented MC, yo
So I assault you with my pump…cuz bitch, you fuel my ego
---hmm.not feelin
But i’m impressed though…I couldn’t have made it sooner
But more‘cuz she manages to have an 0-1 record in LLL jr.
---personal, coo
She just rose through the grapevines…Quill ain’t vet, ya see
‘cuz it ain’t that she got no vice...
…she straight has novice tendencies
---lol, nice
I’m forgettin’ she existed but she made me dumber by far
‘cuz I read your verse…
…now my intellect’s complaining ‘bout working too hard
---almost
Left this bitch in shards…yeah, I already KO’d her then
And fuck half-assing…
...i’m too lazy to drop to your level again
---not bad, but not good for closing shot
ahh...very very close match...here were the best lines in the battle
^dope ass shits right there...
but for real, this was mighty close...each had
a few personals and wordplay hits...but i think Meters
had stronger personals...the line about her using
nameplays was nice...the novice line was nice too
Quill had some like the Nah line and the closer..but
neither gave me a chuckle like Meters' did..
V.Meters.
"And I feel like an idiot working my day
around a call but when I pick up I don't know what to say"
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good battle
I have to give it to Quill though
but this one had me cracking up:
"I decide lines son…that’s how it stands slut, I’m the winner
Because I make demands…
…and you only make da man’s dinner"
the verses were almost even, but Quill took it by a hair
v - Quill
Last edited by $pitacular; July 31st, 2004 at 12:18 AM
LMAO....that demand line had me cracking up too.....I think that line pretty much did it for me. The rest of the verses were just OK....
Vote - Meters
this wasnt bad...
it was better than i expected i think quill is very underrated and
can come pretty nice when she wants too and she did it here
i also think that meters has elevated immensly over the past few months
both had some blah punches and some stand out punches as well
i think the standout punches took over the battle
between the two quill was most consistent
she has some slick wordplay, which the average battler
probably wouldnt get...
meters was consistent too but his about half way through
he kinda lost and then picked it up again at the end
gonna v/ quill for being most consistent and having some
pretty nice punches..
nice battle
Good battle, but Quill came slightly better with consistency and harder punches.
Vote: Quill
I now officially respect God...just for the fact..that we beef..and he didn't hate vote..and to $pit too.
V/ Quill
just a better all around verse, metres came pretty ill though, gotta give him his respect due for that ish....
pz
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