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    Escape The Beat [Feat] Word Definate & Formula

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    Now before you read please be aware that we werent goin for the same thing in this subject but actually our own interpretation of it...




    Escape The Beat [Feat] Word Definate & Formula
    Written By: ELEETE Word Definate Formula


    [ELEETE]
    Trapped in the confinement of my mind I struggle to find...
    Illusion and reality...tightly grip the pen and draw the line...
    Because when time stops...an remains idle in this state...
    Impatiently I wait, watch the clock an wait for it to break...
    As the hour glass binds my mental state through sound...
    I quickly pace through crowds, to escape this round...
    Now lost in thoughts trail...I’m running from insanity...
    I panic frantically...As my breath begins to fade rapidly...
    My lung capacity can’t tolerate...There’s no hope to escape...
    Confused in a daze...I try to separate the real from the fake...
    As I continue to break...Through my fingers my fate slips away...
    I can’t help but obey the calling that leads me to betray…
    Myself...an portray someone else…Which isn’t me…
    An deliberately easily fall victim like a fiend to the heat…
    As my knees hit the cold concrete…I give-in in defeat…
    “What do you want from me!” I turn to the streets an I plead…
    As my retreat’s complete…I face him an eye to eye we meet…
    He speaks “Now Eleete, you really didn’t think you could escape the beat?”



    [Word Definate]

    Paranoia sets in, I’m glancing over my shoulders,
    The chill bumps grow colder
    As my stepping stones are substitute with boulders.
    Sitting behind stacked folders of written collaborations,
    While my gifted imaginations
    Conjuring a presence that’s in every way non-evasive.
    Shaken, I sit non-complacent holding this pen
    And boldly listen
    To the sound with the mission to cause indecision
    Within my thoughts of what to do next.
    Too perplexed,
    I lock every door and fasten every window
    While massive innuendo
    Tells me there more to this elapsed scenario.
    Very slow with my elbow, I tap the closet,
    "Fuck, have I lost it?!",
    I storm to the sink to wet my face and in attempt, snap the faucet.
    Within the allotted time, I secure the water line,
    Taking this nautical sign
    To return to my desk and in turn relinquish prodicle lines.
    While jotting rhymes, I notice the fear is passing,
    Its end is near my grasping
    And appears to be geared on the ink that’s everlasting.
    The last thing I’ll ever do...is let the past repeat,
    You’ll never catch me
    Because while I’m writing...I’m escaping the beat...


    [Formula]

    Breath’s on short notice, starting to lose focus
    Microphone static backfires..
    ... And pounds my ears like fresh grenades broken
    Even when I’m floating, I’m trying to hide
    But it seeks and finds me - burns inside like oxide
    It’ll crawl in my head and die - just to punish me
    Taunt my mind until I lose peace, need to refurnish B
    Nourish me - Please - let me flourish and be free
    Believe the saying..
    .. Some things stay w/ you forever and a day and..
    .. What I’m relaying to you is delaying - pause - gasp
    Relax - smoke - relapse - choked up - I doped up too fast
    But it’s still there! - I cannot smoke away the problem
    There’s no solvent, so I’m looking at rock bottom
    Running - weave - Stunning – Can’t Receive
    A map for an escape route so it’s there permanently
    Churning within me - butterflies of a different kind
    Spirit confides over time and I’m left w/ an empty mind
    Empty? Wait – Something’s still trying to live
    And I don’t want it to keep breathing!
    ... But blood’s receding and I just can’t give
    My all in this fight, throw down the mic, knuckle up
    My buckle’s fucked, for this ride I have to use subtle touch
    Not be too pushy - or it will attack all organs w/ such a vibe
    That my body will pulsate and shake uncontrollably like wire’s live..
    When you just graze them - I fall down, call out loud
    "CAN SOMEBODY HELP ME GET THIS OUT OF MY FUCKING HEAD?"
    I expect someone - but instead get nothing less than silence..
    .. Is everybody dead ?
    It’s finally caught up to me - invisible but holding paper and pen
    My head nods - but I try to spin around and move my feet again
    But I trip, and the utensil gets gripped in my hand..
    .. I lay on the street
    I’m no longer man.. Admitted Defeat..
    Just an instrument – music’s tool - haunted by the beat
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    collab was genuine...
    "Very slow with my elbow, I tap the closet,
    "Fuck, have I lost it?!",
    I storm to the sink to wet my face and in attempt, snap the faucet".
    imagry nice the whole drop had utter most intellegence...
    ".. Some things stay w/ you forever and a day and..
    .. What I’m relaying to you is delaying - pause - gasp
    Relax - smoke - relapse - choked up - I doped up too fast
    But it’s still there"
    word play was ill....
    keep buildin...

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    overal this is a great callab piece you 3 have good views on the subjust the ryhme schme and imagrey was there loving the concept also looks like you three took your time in this and it really shows in your work ill

    As the hour glass binds my mental state through sound...
    I quickly pace through crowds, to escape this round...
    Now lost in thoughts trail...I’m running from insanity...
    I panic frantically...As my breath begins to fade rapidly...


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