1st verse of my 1st song (done ages ago)

[Reynolds]

I look back on my life/
Ive seen a lot/
Even though Im only a young guy/
Ive seen enough pain to last me a life time/
Every rhyme I write/
Reflects on the times ive hurt/
Or been hurt/
I put in alotta work/
And im just getting paid/
I got my wife pregnant/
1st time I EVER laid her/
And got laid myself/
The last thing I want is for her to cry 4 help/
As she sees her seed and man bleed/
In the street from other gangstas beef/
I got my deal to get outta the street/
Them drug dealins would’ve got me locked up away/
And then depression would set as my heart set to stone/
No place to go/
And nobody to hold/
This is my fault/
Why couldn’t I stay strong?/
Where did I go so wrong?/
When did I go so cold?/
Why didn’t I stand bold?/
And tell the world to hell wit yall?/
This is the path I drew/
So ima draw sumthin new/
Na to hell wit this I lost my girl, my son & my writin passion/
Ive been givin another chance at life/
Im goin on to thugs mansion/

I did this a while ago when i was depressed all i used to listen to was Thugz mansion so i did this verse to the beat holla @ ur thoughts.

[Big Kountry]

yeah thats hot dunie

[Reynolds]

Thanx dawg much appreciated uppin #2

[Mistral]

You need to leave a link to a open mic that you left decent feedback to or this gets closed, Thanks.

[Reynolds]

Uppin #2

[Reynolds]

Uppin #3..........................................

[Mistral]

Closed, Failed To Follow The Rules.