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    Broken letter

    Dear Paula,

    The things i say dont have to be true
    but the thing is all i wanted form life was you
    known you for a year now not once did i not love
    the thing wich is you i put me below and you above
    And the list of demands i layed before you
    Under the circumstances i grew to adore you
    Before you.. i was even to diverged for myself
    the past bringing me joy You loved me aswell
    a broken letter.. feelings for you always getting better
    feelings for other.. i knew nothin even after i met her
    Controling my emotions never seemed so hard
    but unfortunatly your same feeling never seemed so far
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    Far, Far
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    Im mean seriously i never been so deep dearly
    it was mearly a mistake... love is what steers me
    Never ment for you to fear me, it was for you to hear me
    I aint askin you to feel me.. but glances at me
    A year of respect.. the thoughts of us chances happy
    Look my love will never die.. even when you think death of life
    Even when your feeling low... and ya eyes wanna cry
    Every lie.. The undecided truth.. look I cant forget you
    What to do.. i cant hide my feelings from moods
    My feelings for you.. even mistakes you made
    i dont care if your imperfect.. your you today
    Even all the rock music.. jeez it is off my mind
    I can bare the alicea Keys Hits all the time
    All the rhymes it keeps me going and its all alright
    I miss my freaky rock chick who stole that first kiss
    and you see with those hot lips it aint the worst kiss
    My minds burstin... only you are worth it
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    .
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    Worth it, Worth it
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    Lets take it back to the day were me n u collide
    The class of romance.. before i started to rhyme
    the parted intwined joined together only part of the time
    The heart or the mind? my love never went down
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    Feeling for you never changed love is still what i send now
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    Its been found..
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    You supported us.......................
    ........................... Ever since now.

    Signed,
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    Last edited by Masahiko.; April 24th, 2004 at 12:37 AM
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    nice nice...i liked it...go to mine and see what you think........

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=126209

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    Nice peice. Vocabulary was kind of basic. Structure was ok not great but ok. Nice way to put the topic. Others probaly wouldnt put it in Letter form. Good peice.
    Keep at it.
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