Feelings - Emotions

[Topic]

I wish.....
... I wish i could show you my tears as i wrote this
I dream I could describe my firts passionate Kiss
Imagine my feelings one last time when my perents were once together
and every heart break i feel, when i remember they'll be separated forever
The beauty...I wish I could desicribe the beauty is my lovers eyes
And I dream but cant find the words she lays into my silent crys
And the violent times. I wish again i couled feel your care
All feelings are ment to be felt...
.........................but who says there ment to be shared
How can i explain myself when theres nothing to be seen
I can leave tears on paper...
....................But how leave tears on a computer screen
Im sad, and I notive this as i wipe my eyes
I live for noone...... so my life tends to lies
Yeah i live for these times...I live for rhymes
I wrote this verse for everyones lows and highs
You got feelings? You can share them with mine
You can leave Smileys and laughter, but crys are crossing the line
LOL, seriously im laughin at my comotion
1 last line...wait for it....
...........................Fuck Internet Emotion

[Perpetual]

lol

nice flow, i felt what you meant
i like your style
had a good a topic that is not over-played
tight shit
keep it up man

[Topic]

thanx ill get my link in a sec

[Epical]

Very sentimental in a way.I liked your message behind the rhymes.
I felt as you wrote this as your Bio? in a sense.
Your shceme was okay,although it could use a little work.
Your internals were also readable in this piece.
Your overall format appeared to be very simple.
I like that in a piece like this.
Nice work.

[HyperBole]

That was hot i was feelin' it 4 real. The wordplay was tight and the flow

keep it dude

[Topic]

thanx for the feedback...uppin

[Topic]

uppp 1 last time