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    Steam Rizing`

    in the deep `rizon, which seems sizing,
    i look at her & swear i see steam rising,
    seductive, but fuck it, function -
    lips destructive, i have no compunction,
    slowly jumping, at every chance of touching,
    both pupils bulging, eyes glands are running,
    standing sudden, i advance for hugging,
    her striking eye's trance tugging,
    control lost, im pulled into enhanced lovin`
    feet touching and hands rubbing,
    dragged under, the depths of this stag wonder,
    her legs are enveloped, snagged, sundered,
    quickly rising, easy breathing,
    if she stops my hearts freely bleeding,
    but thats no worries, her beauty's captive,
    in a bag so that i can have it,
    she's the earth and stars, the sun and moon,
    i didn't say that just cuz i had fun to do. .
    we're one together, the same & only,
    she's there always, to claim & hold me,
    exclaiming boldly, our punctuality,
    her frame is holy, its the reality -
    no fallacy, but given other circumstance,
    would this special girl be worth a damn,
    or if she'd hurt me man, cuz when i look deeper,
    i contemplate, in that case, if i would keep her,
    i think i would, its not just the body,
    even though she looks fucking godly,
    i put faith in her, with kind & basic words,
    so many ways its worth, so we make it work,
    ten weeks till casey's birth, she's my babe's child,
    i can't wait till her face smiles. . .

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    this is legendary you faggots!

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    Rofl
    Good peice Feeble but last 1 "Victim" was better
    this one's flow was good
    structure was a little off
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    Quote Originally Posted by Feeble Minded

    in the deep `rizon, which seems sizing,
    i look at her & swear i see steam rising,
    seductive, but fuck it, function -
    lips destructive, i have no compunction,
    slowly jumping, at every chance of touching,
    both pupils bulging, eyes glands are running,
    standing sudden, i advance for hugging,
    her striking eye's trance tugging,
    control lost, im pulled into enhanced lovin`
    Hit up 1 of of the open mics in my sig!
    Keep at it
    peace
    Back.

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    Better than expected.


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    i am really liking this peice alot
    loving the flow and concept the most
    didnt really fall of point
    you stayed on the topic well
    I like your style not many people do shit like this

    seductive, but fuck it, function -
    lips destructive, i have no compunction,

    loving these bar

    keep spittin

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    it wuz a g0od piece felt da emotion keep it up
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=124091

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    Quote Originally Posted by ILLunatic
    Better than i can write.
    your right, i am a much better writer than you.

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    haha.. lets test that

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    Topical wise

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    pfffft.. you serious?
    my textual dopeness is seen in all writings.

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    dope. flow dope, structure dope, words dope, meaning dope. imagery dope. overall=dope.

    stay dope and keep at it. hit mines up wen you see it. (God vs Machine)

    peace

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