The Numbers Fair pt.1 (feat. #7)
The ludicrous one
won
today’s
tree
before
five
sick
‘s
ate
asinine’s
tenasity
Monster!
The ludicrous one
won
today’s
tree
before
five
sick
monster’s
ate
asinine’s
tenasity
…number.
The Numbers Fair pt.1 (feat. #7)
The ludicrous one
won
today’s
tree
before
five
sick
‘s
ate
asinine’s
tenasity
Monster!
The ludicrous one
won
today’s
tree
before
five
sick
monster’s
ate
asinine’s
tenasity
…number.
[re]produce [y]our Mother's b[r]e[a]st milk...
and patch dark spots in the sun
wow thats .....short....u need more words in ur lines....
i wasnt feelin it at all i didnt get the concept i dont even know if u even stook to ur topic ..,....
lol...
thanks..
[re]produce [y]our Mother's b[r]e[a]st milk...
and patch dark spots in the sun
no prob....l.o.l.....
i loved this piece...how each line represented a number but with intense abstract thought. You're piece's seem to always mold beautifully.....i would like you to join Soft focus.....please...we only do topical/poetry and you would fit beautifully...great piece....
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How's it feel to lack in comparison?............
that was his concept... a original concept I can enjoy... nothing major but it was nice...... it was 2 lines broken down into 10.... good shit...Originally Posted by Philo
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ok well i feel kinda stupid now.....lol....which isnt a first......but ive read this thing like i dont know how many times now for the past few days, just trying to get some sort of idea on this piece, but now thanks to the all smart ass D its all coming together now! LOL! and really its an awsome concept, actually its a very different concept, something ive never really seen before, maybe i have but i probably didnt get it then either lol.but no really, that was some good thinking. and i love pieces that make me think, and im telling you this one pretty much fried my brain at first lol.
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thankyou for the views and the replies. Its a concept I toyed with for a while and the significance of the words are just as meaningful as the numbers themselves. You scratched the surface.... and I appreciate that.
but there are two parts for a reason...
Mr. Wordplay I will tell you there is much more major concept in there than might reach the eye.
but now I'm getting on a highhorse.... I just glad you read and replied.
.thanks.
[re]produce [y]our Mother's b[r]e[a]st milk...
and patch dark spots in the sun
up this.
[re]produce [y]our Mother's b[r]e[a]st milk...
and patch dark spots in the sun
this was pretty original...nice idea...I liked
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^^^^ yo that shit is hott.. real deep.. you have a lot of talent... ever been published?
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